Prisoner

Sad poem, Alexis. Partings are never sweet sorrows I'm afraid. Love the one line short punch of this poem. Love always.

This is a strong one liner!

No one is ever ready for this prison.... Well put!! Congrats Alexis, for your placement in the contest!! ;-)

oh Alexis, so sad..I love it though a lot...you are on fire lately lovely Alexis! congrats on your placement :)-luloo

A 7 for this beautiful, WINNING entry, Alexis. Superb use of metaphor. Janice

aww... so sad, a worthy winner - wow these are all so good...

Oh, .. Just too brilliant wow.. Seems like I am getting crazy about one line stuff. Congratulation for top place.

- Congratulations on your 1st place in the contest, Alexis - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Congratulations on your win with this well emoted one liner. Hugs, Afzal.

Very sad win Alexis, congratulations...

A potent Monoku. Leaves an impression.

Powerful dear, Alexis! Well done!

So much said in few words. Excellent Monoku. Hugs, Afzal

Can almost hear the cell doors slamming behind...powerful! huggers ~ j

Excellent line Alexis ! hugs jan xx

I love this, Alexis. Oh, I need to think something up fast!!!

Very sad Alexis, I wish we could escape.

I love it, can relate !

'called' - I feel I have become your poem-parent and you my sweetly receptive yearling! What a great line, Alexis - such effective emotion succinctly delivered. Poetry hugs ... Mama CayCay (I say the parent/child thing with no idea of your age - just a thought, just now)