Prisoner

I knew you would be gone soon, but I wasn't prepared for this prison called  sadness. 

















10-11-16

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Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 11/25/2016 1:21:00 PM

Sad poem, Alexis. Partings are never sweet sorrows I'm afraid. Love the one line short punch of this poem. Love always.

Kim Morrison

Date: 10/15/2016 8:05:00 AM

This is a strong one liner!

Teddy Kimathi

Date: 10/14/2016 8:35:00 AM

No one is ever ready for this prison.... Well put!! Congrats Alexis, for your placement in the contest!! ;-)

Beautiful Scars

Date: 10/13/2016 11:35:00 AM

oh Alexis, so sad..I love it though a lot...you are on fire lately lovely Alexis! congrats on your placement :)-luloo

Janice Canerdy

Date: 10/12/2016 1:28:00 PM

A 7 for this beautiful, WINNING entry, Alexis. Superb use of metaphor. Janice

Anna-Marie Docherty

Date: 10/12/2016 12:49:00 PM

aww... so sad, a worthy winner - wow these are all so good...

Augustus Black

Date: 10/12/2016 12:18:00 PM

Oh, .. Just too brilliant wow.. Seems like I am getting crazy about one line stuff. Congratulation for top place.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/12/2016 11:00:00 AM

- Congratulations on your 1st place in the contest, Alexis - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Alexis Y.
Date: 10/12/2016 11:13:00 AM

Hi Ann-Lise, Thank you so much. I appreciate you coming by to congratulate me:-) Alexis

Afzal Nusker

Date: 10/12/2016 10:56:00 AM

Congratulations on your win with this well emoted one liner. Hugs, Afzal.

Alexis Y.
Date: 10/12/2016 11:14:00 AM

Hi Afzal, Thank you so much. I appreciate you coming by to congratulate me:-) Alexis

Charlie Smith

Date: 10/12/2016 10:09:00 AM

Very sad win Alexis, congratulations...

Alexis Y.
Date: 10/12/2016 11:15:00 AM

Hi Charlie, Thank you so much. I appreciate you coming by to congratulate me:-) Alexis

Paloma P

Date: 10/12/2016 7:36:00 AM

A potent Monoku. Leaves an impression.

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 10/12/2016 7:18:00 AM

Powerful dear, Alexis! Well done!

Afzal Nusker

Date: 10/12/2016 3:19:00 AM

So much said in few words. Excellent Monoku. Hugs, Afzal

Lim'Rik Flats

Date: 10/11/2016 9:44:00 PM

Can almost hear the cell doors slamming behind...powerful! huggers ~ j

Jeff Davies

Date: 10/11/2016 3:44:00 PM

Alexis, your short poem says a lot. No one can ever completely prepare for loss.

Jan Allison

Date: 10/11/2016 3:39:00 PM

Excellent line Alexis ! hugs jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/11/2016 3:28:00 PM

I love this, Alexis. Oh, I need to think something up fast!!!

Tim Smith

Date: 10/11/2016 2:32:00 PM

Very sad Alexis, I wish we could escape.

Tanis Troutman

Date: 10/11/2016 2:24:00 PM

I love it, can relate !

CayCay Jennings

Date: 10/11/2016 2:11:00 PM

'called' - I feel I have become your poem-parent and you my sweetly receptive yearling! What a great line, Alexis - such effective emotion succinctly delivered. Poetry hugs ... Mama CayCay (I say the parent/child thing with no idea of your age - just a thought, just now)

Alexis Y.
Date: 10/11/2016 2:52:00 PM

Hi CayCay, Thank you very much. I welcome your help.I'm glad you liked my one liner. I hope Silent approves of it. Two mothers? Now that would be awesome: -)Alexis

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