Prisms On the Shore

a prism dance floor - starlight-speckled grains of sand under comet sky glistening ocean - billowy waves dance freely engulfing prisms surging waves seek land - prisms waltz on the shoreline in the moonlit tide By Rhonda Johnson-Saunders, January 24, 2012

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/24/2012 6:04:00 PM

Rhonda, all of your haikus.. are very lovely~ i like the waves that take the land in... enjoyed, and good luck in the contest,..p.d.

Kash Poet

Date: 1/24/2012 6:34:00 AM

Beautiful haiku.Linda will like it.Best wishes.

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 1/24/2012 10:22:00 AM

Thanks so much!! Glad you liked. I was looking for a better first line on the third haiku to bring it together but settled with this. Still not satisfied. Oh well! Blessings, Rhonda