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Priory Woods 2022

I walk through the pristine green
Follow the footpath around 
And finally arrive at the unkempt 
Natural burial ground.
The field has matured over
The past ten years
The Hawthorne now overshadows
The seat where I shed my tears.
Just a wild meadow now
No memorials or stones
Just a small wooden pegs
Over each repository of bones.
I kept my promise to you,
To survive and live on
Though the pain was intense
The  first year after you’d gone. 
But, all pain eases with time 
And I learned to cope with life
Found the joy of a new love
With a loving, caring wife.
I don’t come here often now
But somehow I have to let you know
You gave me strength to continue,
I’ll never let those memories go.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2022




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Date: 12/29/2022 12:30:00 PM
The reader doesn't know who is talking to whom so is not engaged.More detail is needed for those who do not know what a Hawthorn is
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Terry Ireland
Date: 12/29/2022 12:54:00 PM
Thank you David. Will bear that in mind if I do a rewrite. Best regards.

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