Jack Horne Poet Rhyme

Prince Charming

He staggered from her bedroom zombie like,
And scratched his armpits, belching, breaking wind;
His hair was sticking up, his beard unkempt;
He took a shower, brushed his teeth – and grinned.

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Carol Sunshine Brown August 22, 2011 at 4:11 PM Congratulations on your placement in Moses' "Boisterous Comedy" contest Jack. Love, Carol

Dr.Ram Mehta August 22, 2011 at 3:54 PM Congratulations on the win in the contest of John, jack

Tony Lane August 22, 2011 at 10:22 AM Well written and a lot of fun jack. Tony

John Freeman August 21, 2011 at 10:03 PM Cool ideal Jack, "the wind and grin. Haaaa! Agape, Moses

David Williams August 21, 2011 at 5:19 PM hey Jack congrats on a great win David

Linda-Marie Sweetheart August 21, 2011 at 4:36 PM way to go Jack my friend congrats on another great win with this witty write from that super photo luv..

Linda-Marie Sweetheart August 15, 2011 at 3:43 PM this is too funny Jack and suits the photo just fine luv.. good luck in the contest.. Prince Charming like none I wish to know..oh..

Carolyn Devonshire August 15, 2011 at 1:18 PM Hysterical, Jack! I love the way you describe this man. I'm assuming this is for John's contest and, if it is, he's going to love it. The title is a riot too! Best wishes for success. Love, Carolyn

Andrea Dietrich August 14, 2011 at 10:09 PM Gotta come back here and fave this one!

Andrea Dietrich August 14, 2011 at 10:06 PM hahaha. Oh MY you did it again. The PERFECT entry to that contest. And I just did limericks having nothing to do with the picture. YOu deserve first place with this.

Elizabeth Wesley August 14, 2011 at 7:15 PM Not my type of prince charming but your description of him is hilarious!