Prince Charming

He staggered from her bedroom zombie like,
And scratched his armpits, belching, breaking wind;
His hair was sticking up, his beard unkempt;
He took a shower, brushed his teeth – and grinned.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 8/22/2011 4:11:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement in Moses' "Boisterous Comedy" contest Jack. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/22/2011 3:54:00 PM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of John, jack
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Date: 8/22/2011 10:22:00 AM
Well written and a lot of fun jack. Tony
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Date: 8/21/2011 10:03:00 PM
Cool ideal Jack, "the wind and grin. Haaaa! Agape, Moses
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Date: 8/21/2011 5:19:00 PM
hey Jack congrats on a great win David
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Date: 8/21/2011 4:36:00 PM
way to go Jack my friend congrats on another great win with this witty write from that super photo luv..
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Date: 8/15/2011 3:43:00 PM
this is too funny Jack and suits the photo just fine luv.. good luck in the contest.. Prince Charming like none I wish to know..oh..
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Date: 8/15/2011 1:18:00 PM
Hysterical, Jack! I love the way you describe this man. I'm assuming this is for John's contest and, if it is, he's going to love it. The title is a riot too! Best wishes for success. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 8/14/2011 10:09:00 PM
Gotta come back here and fave this one!
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Date: 8/14/2011 10:06:00 PM
hahaha. Oh MY you did it again. The PERFECT entry to that contest. And I just did limericks having nothing to do with the picture. YOu deserve first place with this.
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Date: 8/14/2011 7:15:00 PM
Not my type of prince charming but your description of him is hilarious!
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