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Primeness
Primeness
David J Walker
When there was only the
Night and
The moon
And us
And we drank the light
From far away stars
And you were glow
And I was vision
Sent to intercede
In the reflection of
A certain
Perceived form
Of passions perfection
Within the primeness of
An imperfect world
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