Prime Couple

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09/30/24

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Cantest by Janice Canerdy.

In Eden Garden, Sir Adam to walk free , being too happy with the First Lady Eve Madam sharing an apple, felt sappy. To walk free being too happy ignorant of malice or crime . The couple ! Man and woman : Prime. With the First Lady Eve Madam, eating apple Adam gained sense. Wisdom and knowledge sprouted hence. Sharing an apple felt sappy and started Geat Human Kingdom. Population went on random. S

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