Primarily In Love With Fall

leaf on my pillow
dew covered grass feels mellow….
falls’ trees are yellow

trees are seldom blue
daisies are seldom blue too….
nature births Haiku

haikus hurting my head
powdered snow makes a nice bed….
ice is seldom red


By Robb A. Kopp
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Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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October 8, 2010 at 3:34 AM
Enjoyed reading through your unique fall haiku, Robb! Congrats! -- nikko :)
Dietrich Avatar
October 5, 2010 at 8:31 PM
Interesting ones, Robb. And cute! congratulations. Luv, Andrea
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October 5, 2010 at 3:01 PM
Congrats Robb on your win in the Haiku contest with these great expressions in Haiku form.. enjoy your victory with luv ...
A   Avatar
October 5, 2010 at 12:47 PM
Robb, Congratulations and thanks for supporting my contest. I had lots of fun running this contest,.p.d.
Roberts Avatar
October 5, 2010 at 12:43 PM
lovely entry, much enjoyed , congrats on your win in the contest
Brown Avatar
October 5, 2010 at 12:20 PM
Congratulations Robb on your win in P.D.'s contest *Going Haiku Crazy*. Love, Carol
Mehta Avatar
October 5, 2010 at 12:19 PM
Congratulations on this well deserved win, Robb
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September 27, 2010 at 1:21 PM
Nice work done with a Haiku that rhymes..
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September 27, 2010 at 12:12 PM
Interesting thoughts expressed in your cleverly rhymed haiku series, Robb. I really like the way they flow better with rhyme. Nice work! Love, Carolyn
Roberts Avatar
September 27, 2010 at 9:56 AM
nice set of haikus, much enjoyed
Mehta Avatar
September 27, 2010 at 8:30 AM
Very nice suggestive title, enjoiyed the multiple haikus, Robb
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