Primal

primal timelessness
midnight bonfire by the beach
back to dawn of time



AP: Honorable Mention 2020

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Allen Beilschmidt Sr.

March 26, 2019 at 9:01 AM

Nothing new under the sun. Wonderful HAIKU

Line Gauthier

March 26, 2019 at 9:39 AM

Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Allen.

Warren Doll

March 17, 2019 at 9:27 AM

Great haiku, Line. Such great imagery and so much being said in 3 lines. Transporting the reader from the present day to "back to the time of dawn" by using the universal element of fire Well written. Warmest Wishes~ Warren

Line Gauthier

March 17, 2019 at 9:40 AM

Thank you so much, Warren, for your most appreciated visit and compliment.