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primal timelessness midnight bonfire by the beach back to dawn of time posted on March 16, 2019

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Date: 3/26/2019 9:01:00 AM
Nothing new under the sun. Wonderful HAIKU
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Date: 3/26/2019 9:39:00 AM
Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Allen.
Date: 3/17/2019 9:27:00 AM
Great haiku, Line. Such great imagery and so much being said in 3 lines. Transporting the reader from the present day to "back to the time of dawn" by using the universal element of fire Well written. Warmest Wishes~ Warren
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Date: 3/17/2019 9:40:00 AM
Thank you so much, Warren, for your most appreciated visit and compliment.
Date: 3/17/2019 3:16:00 AM
"bonfire by the beach". I have seen this only on TV but now I want to see it for real, Line. Thanks for creating this one.
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Date: 3/17/2019 7:23:00 AM
My top memorable bonfire experience was in winter and roasting hotdogs. Wow... but both are definitely worth being on a bucket list.