Pride Falters

The Sun was once High up in the sky Looking down on us Head held up with pride The moon no more glimmers The stars impact is not felt In the big blue realm The Sun is is prominent But as the realm changes The Sun departs Even if once Mighty He cannot last For if you are filled with Pride And your head is heald way too up high Even the Mighty cannot survive In the unknown!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Agustin Avatar
August 6, 2024 at 10:48 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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February 20, 2016 at 11:51 PM
s.d, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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December 22, 2015 at 7:19 PM
SHROYON :) stopping by to enjoy some of the best poems and poets of 2010 - 1015 :) Hope you are well enjoying what is left of 2015. Sending an early Christmas Message with Hugs. May you have a blessed Christmas and a happy New Year. Good luck in all you do during 2016. ~SKAT LOVE~
Romaine Avatar
August 24, 2015 at 2:02 PM
Hey Shroyon, stopped by for a visit. This is a true fact: pride is a dangerous thing to indulge in. Your poem has wonderful imagery and great expression. Well done! Be Blessed, Neva
Nayak Avatar
August 24, 2015 at 12:54 PM
Dear Poet, pride hath a fall....this message is always true...and your poem has conveyed this message....love, Anu:-)
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