Pride

it's  all heaven now
it's going down

once was lost
now it's found

walking the line
running out of time

living the life
writing the rhymes

some words go unspoken
but the actions speak loud

once you were weak
now you are proud
Copyright © | Year Posted 2007

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September 17, 2008 at 11:56 PM
Found the link Adam and wish you well with your book.Nice cover drawing.Rgds Brian
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September 15, 2008 at 7:15 PM
Adam this is an excellent write in form imagery and flow, I thank you for sharing the read and for your comments on my poem "Cold Busted". God's Love and Many Blessings, Always, Adell
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