Pride

Like an eagle flying in the sky
I could not give up my sense of pride.
Losing my own sight in the blue
In the intensity I saw it through.

Looking down it seemed so clear
It was only myself I had to fear.
I knew deep down what I must do
Through the darkness I saw the truth.

A lesson learned as the eagle flew
Live,live a life so true.
Now for better things I'll strive
Forget my pride, and be alive.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Allison Avatar
July 8, 2023 at 4:25 PM
wise words indeed John live live a life so true:-) hugs jan xx
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July 9, 2023 at 1:38 AM
Thank you Jan for your time and comment.xx
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July 7, 2023 at 11:11 AM
Brother John, if pride means you are proud of the achievements you have made in your life that’s something to be proud of. I enjoyed the read… Sis Belle
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July 9, 2023 at 1:47 AM
Hi sister Beryl, getting through each day is an achievement for us all, the way things are today. xx
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