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Priceless Freedom

A lonely sailboat. 
poised over the ocean's width 
grasping his freedom 


Written: December 05, 2021

Copyright © Sotto Poet | Year Posted 2021

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December 6, 2021 at 2:32 PM

Lovely Haiku my friend. The picture is perfect. When I saw the picture the phrase "Oh Lord the sea is so big and my boat is so small" went through my mind. Love it. God Bless, JB

Evelyn Judy Buehler

December 6, 2021 at 11:28 AM

Your powerful imagery well conveys the exhilarating sense of freedom found when sailing in the vast ocean, Lasaad. A beautiful haiku. :)

December 6, 2021 at 8:15 AM

Absolutely stunning imagery and a blessing to read... Regards Silpika

Delice Arleen Skelly

December 6, 2021 at 8:04 AM

Nothing quite so liberating as a poem about the ocean and the freedom that can be found...Delice

Anne-Lise Andresen

December 6, 2021 at 2:54 AM

- Yes, his own master ... beautifully written, Las :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis

December 6, 2021 at 2:38 AM

Outstanding, my friend, Lasaad! Bless you!

Victor Buhagiar

December 6, 2021 at 1:53 AM

You grabbed the feeling when sailing. ~~

December 6, 2021 at 1:24 AM

Ye so much freedom out there, Lasaad, great poem.

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