Priceless Freedom

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A lonely sailboat. poised over the ocean's width grasping his freedom Written: December 05, 2021

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Judy Ball

Date: 12/6/2021 2:32:00 PM

Lovely Haiku my friend. The picture is perfect. When I saw the picture the phrase "Oh Lord the sea is so big and my boat is so small" went through my mind. Love it. God Bless, JB

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 12/6/2021 11:28:00 AM

Your powerful imagery well conveys the exhilarating sense of freedom found when sailing in the vast ocean, Lasaad. A beautiful haiku. :)

Silpika Kalita

Date: 12/6/2021 8:15:00 AM

Absolutely stunning imagery and a blessing to read... Regards Silpika

Delice Arleen Skelly

Date: 12/6/2021 8:04:00 AM

Nothing quite so liberating as a poem about the ocean and the freedom that can be found...Delice

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/6/2021 2:54:00 AM

- Yes, his own master ... beautifully written, Las :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 12/6/2021 2:38:00 AM

Outstanding, my friend, Lasaad! Bless you!

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 12/6/2021 1:53:00 AM

You grabbed the feeling when sailing. ~~

Harry Horsman

Date: 12/6/2021 1:24:00 AM

Ye so much freedom out there, Lasaad, great poem.