Price of Success

Sometimes we strive
For success hoped on
Inside burns a drive
We tend to go on
Seaching for the unseen
Amidst hurdles and impediments
Costly prices we pay 
Draining our pockets clean

14/05/2013
5 minutes chanllenge
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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May 18, 2013 at 9:02 PM
Congratulation on a well deserved win, always enjoying your poems plus more... I like the way everyone showed off their poem in less than 5 minutes..... LINDA
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May 15, 2013 at 11:19 AM
A nice 5 minute poem. Congrats :-) SKAT
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May 15, 2013 at 11:17 AM
Congrats on your win GL.
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