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Price of beauty

Pretty girl all made up  An image for the eye She appears so perfect but it's a lie She Is fake in every way Plastic surgery fake hair So fragile touch her and shell tear Pretty little girl perched up for all to see Is this really what you want to be A porcelain doll  Trapped with strict laws Scolded for the simplest flaws Your beauty won't last forever How long till you fall Ticking time bomb they can only push you so far When you break you'll shatter

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Date: 11/22/2010 11:03:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors Ashley. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information on PoetrySoup including contests by members of PoetrySoup and contests by the PoetrySoup site also which you as a new member and us oldies also may enter. If you have questions please feel free to ask ANYONE here. We are ALL willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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