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Price and Success

The price we pay As the sun, each day Arise to take its tribute And the rain beating us relief, Is the success of a young leaf. With a force within so brute. Found help, which is no help The stinking feeling of a scalp When the tough is a Goliath. Relieved at the tether of hope Falling short to cope Strengthened by a divine faith. We seek greener pastures Better and secured futures For the born and the unborn We to labour for them enjoy The price, the pain, is our joy For a priceless success horn. 5 minute challenge- complete poem : 'Price of Success'

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Date: 6/19/2013 1:10:00 PM
CONGRATULATIONS in Russell's contest.... Luv~ SKAT
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Date: 6/19/2013 2:41:00 AM
Congratulations on you win. A great revision of your original poem. Connie
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Date: 6/17/2013 3:41:00 AM
great job....so many truths is such a short space!
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