Prey'D

I'm suffocating in the darkness blinded by misperception trying.. so hard to escape What do you want from me? My mind? My body? My soul? I turn left, looking for you still unable to see but I feel your presence, I since your near with panic, I turn right, I know your there you strike me!.. on the ground, I hear the sound of your hatred I don't deserve this! Why am I always... always being prey'd?

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/12/2011 7:19:00 AM

A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Kalene. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol

Kalene Bryant
Date: 9/13/2011 7:38:00 PM

thank you so much carol!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/12/2011 12:31:00 AM

WELCOME TO POETRY SOUP.. ENJOYED READING YOUR MOST CREATIVE POETRY TONIGHT.. ENJOY THE SITE AS U SHARE WORDS WITH LUV..

Kalene Bryant
Date: 9/13/2011 7:39:00 PM

thank you so much linda!