Pretty Petals

A petal has fallen on the ground
Let’s look around for its beginning 
A flower has lost a sad surround 
The new handicap barely charming 

Others flowers hold their smiles 
Look at them, still in good shape 
We neglect their petals meanwhile
That decor the seasonal landscape

While admiring a beautiful flower 
We ignore its petals individually
Why don’t we carefully consider
Chin, nose, eyes and ears closely 
 
Look at every single part of a face
That composed the sweet smiling 
Like pretty petals sit in their places 
Set the beautiful flower’s meaning
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Allison Avatar
September 28, 2016 at 10:41 AM
beautiful personification Xaysouvanh:-) hugs Jan xx
Phengphong Avatar
August 11, 2016 at 1:44 PM
Thank you Silent One
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