Preterition Gods Tears

God's tears weep for a lost man keep;
God's tears weep for a lost man.
Lost or stolen; trodden or forbidden
The brazen altar man
A hill walked as ribbons of flesh hung man
Beyond a country far
Scopes at burning desire man on our journey
Fallen upon man yet bright morning star
A foot brings victory to you man
Gods tears weep for a lost man
Lost or stolen; trodden or forbidden
The brazen altar man
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Kendrick Avatar
May 21, 2016 at 8:38 AM
Your poem was awesome, creative and unique..Thank you for entering my Preterition Contest..I am sorry for being so long in congratulating you but things have been happening here that I could not control..Congratulations on your placement..Sara
Teas Avatar
May 21, 2016 at 10:27 AM
thank you
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