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Pretence Makes My Day

The nonpareil, on cloud nine part of my day is dawn! Wake up from a dream, and behold! You are beside me! Close my eyes again, feigning to sleep,  I imagine, you are going to kiss on my closed eyes to notify - it's morning.  Frisky birds chattering, a strip of sunlight peeping through the wooden blinds,  I, as mischievous as I am, pose not to hear you,  Pretend to fall back in deeper slumber just to have that kiss one more time! Written on June 18, 2020

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Date: 6/19/2020 10:15:00 AM
This is very sweet and romantic! This gem resonates with me..Very heart-warming!
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 6/19/2020 10:43:00 AM
Thank you, JCB. Your comments are so inspiring for me! Love, Mala
Date: 6/18/2020 7:33:00 AM
Oh, how teasingly beautiful! Lovely write, Mala.
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 6/18/2020 7:48:00 AM
Thanks so much, Vijay! So glad you enjoyed it! The theme of the contest is quite interesting!
Date: 6/18/2020 7:15:00 AM
HellYou ho Mala, had a romantic dream. I have dreams -I am bride I walk down the ail, and I see my family. Ont he other side the family is foggy. My husband is foggy. My bouti Love Darlenque is broccol. I have this dream often.Love Darlene your friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 6/19/2020 12:19:00 PM
Hello Marla, yes in our dreams our wishes do come true. I am pleased that my words made your day. It is hot and humid here. I like this weather. Enjoy your day my friend. Love Darlene Hugs .
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 6/18/2020 7:37:00 AM
Dear Darlene, I am so touched! In dreams, our wishes come true! Dear Friend, your lovely words made my day! Hugs, Mala