Pressed For Time : Make Their Jaws Drop

She was my virtual secret lover 
who staked a claim on me; it was her choice.
Enshrouded in intense obscurity
I never saw her face or heard her voice.

She spoke to me in silent words of yearning
inscribed in coloured ink on fragrant notes
attached to each a petal that gave meaning
to the emotions that adorned her quotes.

A longer letter came one autumn evening;
It left me trembling and with misty eyes.
With ailing strength she begged for love, forgiveness. 
Her final words still echo her goodbye. 

Attached there were two orange blossom petals
a sign of never ending bond of love,
now a treasured memory pressed for time eternal
of my virtual secret lover watching from above.

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Contest: Make Their Jaws Drop
Sponsor: FJ Thomas
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Robinson Jr. Avatar
November 14, 2016 at 5:07 PM
Beautiful teary poem, Paul. Didn't just make my jaw drop, it made me weep in secret places of my heart for your loss. A soulful love poem of the highest order. Many prayers of love and peace to you, your poetic friend, RW.
Callus Avatar
November 15, 2016 at 1:22 PM
Thank you, Freddie; your comments are meaningful and much appreciated. Thank you also for your support. Regards // paul
Macfarlane Avatar
June 6, 2016 at 9:30 PM
Love transcends all boundaries, a beautiful heartfelt write Paul. Well done! Hugs
Callus Avatar
June 7, 2016 at 11:16 AM
Thank you Cecilia. I am glad that love has come your way again:) hugs // paul
Fiery Avatar
June 2, 2016 at 1:51 AM
I have been missing quite a lot of poems...sorry for the late visits Paul...this poem is marvelously written but it's also about a lost love ...All the best for the contest !!! Hugs ~ Red~
Callus Avatar
June 2, 2016 at 9:00 AM
You've been missed as well, Red:) I have just read your 'insolent heart' poem...blue eyes can be so tempting! So glad that you enjoyed this sad poem...lost love never fails to inspire! Hugs ~ paul
Dietrich Avatar
May 30, 2016 at 1:15 PM
Perfect title about this letter from an angel. Very well told, Paul. Good luck in this contest. With 100 entries, I wonder what are chances are!!! We can only hope.
Callus Avatar
May 30, 2016 at 5:34 PM
I'm pleased that you like it, Andrea. Placing in this contest won't be easy...a win will be worth three times more than usual:) Regards ~ paul
Onclaud Avatar
May 27, 2016 at 5:31 PM
what a great element of surprise as your piece ended, paul... eye-popping indeed!..huggs
Callus Avatar
May 28, 2016 at 4:38 AM
I hope it's what the sponsor is after! Thank you for encouraging me to believe in it, Nette:) Hugs // paul
Marcum Wong Avatar
May 26, 2016 at 8:46 PM
Paul,Paul, this is so moving. I know this will top the list my friend! It is beautiful! #7 ; )
Callus Avatar
May 27, 2016 at 9:12 AM
Thank you for a most lovely reaction to this poem, Connie! You never fail to support and encourage. So pleased that you enjoyed it. ~ Regards // paul
Roper Avatar
May 26, 2016 at 1:19 PM
Paul, a beautiful creation you have painted. Good luck in the contest. Eve
Callus Avatar
May 26, 2016 at 1:35 PM
So pleased that you like it, Eve. Thank you for the lovely comment and wishes. hugs // paul
Sathasivam Avatar
May 26, 2016 at 8:28 AM
Sad but well penned. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it
Callus Avatar
May 26, 2016 at 1:09 PM
Thank you for stopping by, Ravi; glad you enjoyed. Regards // paul
Hicks Avatar
May 26, 2016 at 12:45 AM
A romantic affair ... to end so quickly in tragedy! This was engaging, and as the challenge required ... surprising. "attached to each petal that gave meaning to the emotions that adorned her quotes." Such lovely language.
Callus Avatar
May 26, 2016 at 1:04 PM
I can't accept full praise for this poem, Timothy...it wrote itself....I drove one way and it went another:) But I was not at all surprised...my muse often plays me around like that! Thanks for the feedback...paul
Allison Avatar
May 25, 2016 at 6:00 PM
Beautiful yet sad on so many levels Paul - good luck in the contest:-) Hugs jan xx
Callus Avatar
May 26, 2016 at 12:11 PM
Thank you, Jan. I started off by writing about pressed flowers, then somehow it changed into a sad story. I hope this is what Flo is after! Hugs // paul
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