Present

PRESENT


Present:
That fleeting moment
At which
The promising future  
Turns  
Into living  
Past!


© Demetrios Trifiatis
    19 APRIL 2013
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Devnath  Avatar
April 21, 2013 at 2:14 AM
It's a demonstration of reality of life. Thanks for sharing, my sweet friend. Loved always, bl
Fisher Avatar
April 19, 2013 at 6:01 PM
What a great way to describe a word this is constantly in flux.
Carrillo Avatar
April 19, 2013 at 6:35 AM
Wow! such few words - with so much meaning. Thanks for a lovely write. Lucilla
Sivey Avatar
April 19, 2013 at 6:15 AM
This is truly a shining write my friend! You have presented a perfect write on time and the relative pieces of itself! The present is only in the instantaneous sense, for it becomes the past quickly! I just love how you brought this logic to life here Demetrios! Such a delightful poem, Great Work!!
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