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PRESENT Present: That fleeting moment At which The promising future Turns Into living Past! © Demetrios Trifiatis 19 APRIL 2013

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Bl Devnath

Date: 4/21/2013 2:14:00 AM

It's a demonstration of reality of life. Thanks for sharing, my sweet friend. Loved always, bl

David Fisher

Date: 4/19/2013 6:01:00 PM

What a great way to describe a word this is constantly in flux.

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 4/19/2013 6:35:00 AM

Wow! such few words - with so much meaning. Thanks for a lovely write. Lucilla

Russell Sivey

Date: 4/19/2013 6:15:00 AM

This is truly a shining write my friend! You have presented a perfect write on time and the relative pieces of itself! The present is only in the instantaneous sense, for it becomes the past quickly! I just love how you brought this logic to life here Demetrios! Such a delightful poem, Great Work!!