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Prehistoric Tableau

A steaming forest: pterodactyls soar, and tall dinosaurs eat leaves from high trees as huge predators prepare to attack. describing a picture in a book I remember loving as a child written 15th March for Joseph's Tableau contest

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/1/2021 9:21:00 AM

Reads like a good contender for the contest. I haven't looked at that contest but have seen several postings for it. It was a very scary time to live for humans I would think. Sara

Alexis Y.

Date: 3/26/2021 1:16:00 PM

Hi Jack, I'm just coming back to say congratulations on your 1st place win. It was well deserved. Have a great day and weekend:-) Alexis

Paul Callus

Date: 3/26/2021 12:39:00 PM

You were one of the early explorers in the Lost World, Jack! Even from a young age your imagination served you well! ~ Congratulations on your top placement, my friend // paul

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/26/2021 9:16:00 AM

It's so interesting to see what people chose. So you were dino boy, huh? I babysat one of those!! Congrats, Jack

Joseph May

Date: 3/26/2021 6:04:00 AM

Congrats on your win Jack, Very nicely done

Judy Ball

Date: 3/21/2021 3:04:00 AM

Super write Jack. I can see the picture play out before me as I read. Wonderful imagery. God Bless, JB

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/19/2021 3:12:00 PM

What a magnificent image of the dinosaur age you paint, Jack. The brontosaurus looks big and threatening, but is actually quite gentle, so probably subject to many attacks. Best wishes in Joseph's contest! Hugs, Carolyn

Harry Horsman

Date: 3/18/2021 2:04:00 AM

Oh the imagery is catered for here, Jack. brilliant verse.

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 3/17/2021 12:17:00 PM

Love it Jack. Everyday my grandson does a drawing and tells me about a dino. Some days he will draw what he wants and the next he asks me what to draw. His fav the t rex. Learning lots about them. Hope all is well with you and mum. love phyl

Alexis Y.

Date: 3/15/2021 5:38:00 PM

Hi Jack, You described it well. Best wishes in the contest. Have a wonderful day my friend:-)

David Kavanagh

Date: 3/15/2021 2:21:00 PM

That picture came a long way jack, from the Cretaceous to the present, of an early ambush in the making, nice words good luck in the contest, cheers David

P.S. Awtry

Date: 3/15/2021 1:27:00 PM

Well done! I can see it clearly, the steam, the predators, — and the little boy from your note. Best of luck in the contest!

Jan Allison

Date: 3/15/2021 1:06:00 PM

oh so descriptive jack great imagery indeed:-) hugs Jan xx