Pregnant Earth

First monsoon showers Colour the earth as dark green; pregnant she becomes Date: 5.7.2014

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Faye Gibson

Date: 7/6/2014 6:53:00 PM

Beautiful, Mohan. Love it.

Mohan Chutani
Date: 7/12/2014 9:51:00 AM

Faye, thanks for liking my Haiku. Mohan

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/6/2014 8:59:00 AM

wow, great imagery and personification.

Mohan Chutani
Date: 7/12/2014 9:54:00 AM

Andrea, thanks for appreciating. I learn from all of you. Your 'wind' write was simple awesome. I did leave my like for that the other day in your box. Cannot help repeating it again. Mohan

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/5/2014 12:15:00 PM

- Haiku poems are fun!! - I like your Pregnant earth haiku - well done, Mohan!! (I have post two haiku in this week :)) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Mohan Chutani
Date: 7/12/2014 9:55:00 AM

Anne, thanks for your appreciation. Mohan