Kim Rodrigues Poet Verse

Predilection of Dawn

The glide of the plane almost in step with my rooftop.
Visibility of blue heaven low; lookout for earthwalkers.
My bland Toyota euphoric and banded by tight forest.
The span of an angelic chorus, a serendipitous psalm.
The predilection of dawn, a tributary hawk sails on.
The silver cross shimmies and shakes reflected in mirror.
I steady it with my heartbeat, my smile, my faith.

9/25/2020

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Caren Krutsinger September 28, 2020 at 11:08 AM I would have probably said "imagism" for this one, but you are the author of this magnificent write. Kim Rodrigues September 28, 2020 at 1:24 PM You could be right! I really had a hawk sail over my hood...what a sight. God gifts!

Victor Buhagiar September 25, 2020 at 12:32 PM Strange I rarely see the dawn. It dissipates so quickly in Malta. Lovely poem. ~~ Kim Rodrigues September 25, 2020 at 2:21 PM I catch it at the right moment. Thank you, my friend! Hugs...Kim

Angela Crabtree September 25, 2020 at 10:51 AM Faith moves mountains as they say. Love this write! :) Kim Rodrigues September 25, 2020 at 2:19 PM Thank you, sweet lady!

Anne-Lise Andresen September 25, 2020 at 7:36 AM - "The predilection of dawn, a tributary hawk sails on" ... a beautiful poem that gives a wonderful image, Kim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Kim Rodrigues September 25, 2020 at 8:41 AM Thank you!