Sophia Valentina Poet Rhyme

Predestination's Discrimination

So I hear the blessed children
have a place in Heaven's kingdom,
where they sing and dance in union.
God, He gave His only Son.

For in life a few are chosen - 
break the bread, the Baker's dozen;
stick my head inside the oven,
for I fear that I'm not one.

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Roy Jerden March 1, 2014 at 12:45 PM Wow! I like this one a lot. Interesting rhyming scheme. Meter is spot on as well. Is "Descrimination" an intentional misspelling or a portmanteau of some kind? Sophia Valentina March 3, 2014 at 1:23 AM :( no...just plain ol' dumbness...Spelling corrected! thanks for the heads up.

David Williams February 23, 2014 at 12:08 PM Sophia you have nothing to fear....David

Just That Archaic Poet February 20, 2014 at 12:15 PM I figured the last line would say, "I'm glad that I'm not one" lol. Is this new? I don't remember this one at all. Different from your usual style, but no less impressive or enjoyable. Made me think of Sylvia Plath in the 7th line. Great work, as always.