Predators

Found some new friends last night
They gave me some things
They showed me the happy life
Gave me a pair of wings
Wings that flew forever
Never needed to rest
I guess I thought it would
All be for the best
Never told me it was dangerous
Never showed me the lie
All I saw was wonderful sunsets
And beautiful skies
They told me it would be fun
That it would be fine
Now I'm trapped in a prison
Of my own design
How did I get here?
I have forgotten the way
I tried to find the door
But they all asked me to stay
Now I'm stuck in their dimension
With no plan of release
I would take it back if I could but
I'm not ready for peace
Can't kick the habit
And I can't get away
Wish I never met those predators
But I guess I'd still be prey
Now I'll be here forever
In a tight winding dive
Never take what bad people give you
Because you won't survive

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008



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Date: 11/6/2008 1:40:00 PM
I got the idea for my poem Sucks from you leaving that comment say that it sucks that im sick.
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Date: 11/4/2008 3:31:00 PM
your poems are soo good. i'm jelouse lol lol jk
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Date: 10/16/2008 6:19:00 PM
Hi
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Date: 10/16/2008 5:08:00 PM
I kinda think of you as a friend but if you don't want to be that's cool with me. . . I'm always on here From 4 in the morning to 2 in the morning
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Date: 10/16/2008 5:03:00 PM
NO!!! Its Day-V XD
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Date: 10/16/2008 4:59:00 PM
So.... Wait are you my new best friend??
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Date: 10/16/2008 4:55:00 PM
Look up Day-V XD and I'm the one on the phone with reddish hair
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Date: 10/16/2008 4:41:00 PM
You.......
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Date: 10/16/2008 4:39:00 PM
Do you??
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Date: 10/16/2008 4:24:00 PM
Cool. . . If you go to m y s p a c e and look up Alexz_Dude you'll see my pic. . . And I like punk/rock/rapcore/alternative music...ummm.. I popular people ( only where I live) My favorite word is dude... I've got 1 brother and 0 sisters... I REALLY dislike my mom for all the right reasons... And I have a new best friend to add for me to have now only two friends.... And do you know who my new best friend is??
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Date: 10/16/2008 4:00:00 PM
Yes I know Led Zepplin ( or how ever you spell it, I'm not so good at spelling). That's cool that you play guitar I'm getting one for my 16th b-day in 5 weeks. . .
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Date: 10/16/2008 3:56:00 PM
Thank You. . . I cut myself because well I'm 1) Depressed. 2) I was ually abused, physically abused and emotionally abused. 3) no "Boy" loves me cause I'm either too ugly or too weird. . . And I'm always scared and just need someone to here for me, you know what I mean?? I just dumped him he was 18 just like you are. . . Do you have a ??
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Date: 10/16/2008 3:51:00 PM
Oh yeah and look up the band Hollywood Undead And look up their songs undead and No.5. . . I think that you really like them. . . Tellme wat you think when you're done. . .
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Date: 10/16/2008 3:43:00 PM
Ok... So I have this "Boyfriend" and al he can talk about is getting me in the bed and doin that stuff wit him and I'm afraid to confront him cause I'm scared that he will get upset with me. . . . And I cut myself last night and my mom is angry with me to the point that she just won't let me go anywhere. . . . I need some serious help can you please help me out??
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Date: 10/16/2008 3:32:00 PM
Hey my computer doesn't do that. . . Cause it's a home schooled computer. . . I can only get poetry soup on my computer. . . Can I just tell you on here or somethin??
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Date: 10/16/2008 2:26:00 PM
I can't get on Yahoo! on this computer. . . Can you................... Call me ................ Or something?? Where do you live??
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Date: 10/16/2008 9:37:00 AM
Excellent write, just too bad you fell victim to them. But, your lesson is one that can be taught to others, so maybe through your words you can help make sure children and adults too don't fall victim. Continue sharing your thoughts and writing just like this. Michael
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