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Predator

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In The Catskills Selections From The Writings Of John Burroughs

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Debbie Duncan

Date: 5/14/2017 2:32:00 AM

love the Haiku :)

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/14/2017 9:08:00 PM

Thank you, Debbie!

Roy Pett

Date: 5/5/2017 10:49:00 AM

Brilliant Kim, I had to look up chickadee and shrike, nature can be cruel. :))

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/5/2017 2:40:00 PM

Thanks, Roy!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/5/2017 2:40:00 PM

Thanks, Roy!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/28/2017 7:57:00 PM

I really like this one. I did one on predators a long time ago. I used different animals!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/28/2017 8:07:00 PM

Thanks!

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 4/28/2017 1:04:00 PM

It can be a harsh world for animals as well as people..... I can just imagine the fear in the hunted. Your haiku expresses this well Kim. Lovely! 7 ; )

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/28/2017 8:08:00 PM

Thank you, Connie!

Maria Williams

Date: 4/28/2017 10:23:00 AM

I pity the poor quaking chikadee as the sharp eyed shrike waits for it to move - Lucky the squirrel hole was handy.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/28/2017 8:08:00 PM

So true! Sometimes those squirrels come in handy!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/28/2017 4:05:00 AM

- A great haiku, Kim :) - Best wishes for a lovely weekend - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/28/2017 5:30:00 AM

Thanks so much, Anne-Lise!

John Michaels

Date: 4/28/2017 4:00:00 AM

Ooh, I like this one; pregnant with forboding!! Nice write, Kim. Regards, John.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/28/2017 5:30:00 AM

Thanks so much, John!

Chris Green

Date: 4/27/2017 11:00:00 AM

Not sure what a shrike is but I assume it is the predator. Here's hoping the chickadee is okay. :) Nice Kim.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/27/2017 11:35:00 AM

Thanks, Chris!