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In The Catskills Selections From The Writings Of John Burroughs

PREDATOR an empty squirrel hole a chickadee takes refuge shrike circles the tree Kim Rodrigues © 2017

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017


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Debbie Duncan
Date: 5/14/2017 2:32:00 AM
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love the Haiku :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/14/2017 9:08:00 PM
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Thank you, Debbie!
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Roy Pett
Date: 5/5/2017 10:49:00 AM
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Brilliant Kim, I had to look up chickadee and shrike, nature can be cruel. :))
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/5/2017 2:40:00 PM
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Thanks, Roy!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/5/2017 2:40:00 PM
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Thanks, Roy!
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 4/28/2017 7:57:00 PM
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I really like this one. I did one on predators a long time ago. I used different animals!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/28/2017 8:07:00 PM
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Thanks!
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 4/28/2017 1:04:00 PM
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It can be a harsh world for animals as well as people..... I can just imagine the fear in the hunted. Your haiku expresses this well Kim. Lovely! 7 ; )
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/28/2017 8:08:00 PM
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Thank you, Connie!
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Maria Williams
Date: 4/28/2017 10:23:00 AM
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I pity the poor quaking chikadee as the sharp eyed shrike waits for it to move - Lucky the squirrel hole was handy.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/28/2017 8:08:00 PM
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So true! Sometimes those squirrels come in handy!
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/28/2017 4:05:00 AM
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- A great haiku, Kim :) - Best wishes for a lovely weekend - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/28/2017 5:30:00 AM
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Thanks so much, Anne-Lise!
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John Michaels
Date: 4/28/2017 4:00:00 AM
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Ooh, I like this one; pregnant with forboding!! Nice write, Kim. Regards, John.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/28/2017 5:30:00 AM
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Thanks so much, John!
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Chris Green
Date: 4/27/2017 11:00:00 AM
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Not sure what a shrike is but I assume it is the predator. Here's hoping the chickadee is okay. :) Nice Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/27/2017 11:35:00 AM
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Thanks, Chris!

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