John Beam Poet Haiku

Precocious Steps

More fellers than eyes                                                                                               
standing on end as birds watch                                                                                    
tread lightly the green

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Andrea Dietrich December 18, 2010 at 4:13 PM Cute one, John. I see a very late congratulations is in order for this one!!

Carol Sunshine Brown April 30, 2010 at 9:30 AM Congratulations on your win in Raul's contest John. Love, Carol

Dr.Ram Mehta April 29, 2010 at 7:57 PM Congrats on the win

Iolanda Scripca April 29, 2010 at 7:34 PM CONGRATULATIONS on your 13th place. Let's pop-up the CHAMPAGNE!!!

April 29, 2010 at 7:28 PM Just wanted to stop by and add congratulations on your win in Raul's contest to my other comment. Enjoy your success. Keep on writing! Karen

Linda-Marie Sweetheart April 29, 2010 at 7:14 PM Congrats John on your winning poem in Raul's contest .. great description of the caterpillar and his daily routine.. enjoy your special win..luv.. "Sweetheart"

Raul Moreno April 29, 2010 at 6:26 PM John, congratulations on your success in my Caterpillar's Gait contest...Raul

Doris Culverhouse April 29, 2010 at 6:54 AM cute one is this for the caterpillar contest?

Carol Sunshine Brown April 28, 2010 at 10:41 AM The best to you should you enter the contest John. Love, Carol

April 27, 2010 at 8:27 PM What an interesting take on the picture. So much captured in this poem. Good luck in the contest. Karen

Bakari Wright April 27, 2010 at 7:05 PM very deep haiku John, I had to read this one about 5 times