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Precocious Steps

More fellers than eyes standing on end as birds watch tread lightly the green

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010


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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 12/18/2010 4:13:00 PM
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Cute one, John. I see a very late congratulations is in order for this one!!
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Carol Sunshine Brown
Date: 4/30/2010 9:30:00 AM
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Congratulations on your win in Raul's contest John. Love, Carol
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Dr.Ram Mehta
Date: 4/29/2010 7:57:00 PM
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Congrats on the win
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Iolanda Scripca
Date: 4/29/2010 7:34:00 PM
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CONGRATULATIONS on your 13th place. Let's pop-up the CHAMPAGNE!!!
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Date: 4/29/2010 7:28:00 PM
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Just wanted to stop by and add congratulations on your win in Raul's contest to my other comment. Enjoy your success. Keep on writing! Karen
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Linda-Marie Sweetheart
Date: 4/29/2010 7:14:00 PM
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Congrats John on your winning poem in Raul's contest .. great description of the caterpillar and his daily routine.. enjoy your special win..luv.. "Sweetheart"
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Raul Moreno
Date: 4/29/2010 6:26:00 PM
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John, congratulations on your success in my Caterpillar's Gait contest...Raul
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Doris Culverhouse
Date: 4/29/2010 6:54:00 AM
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cute one is this for the caterpillar contest?
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Carol Sunshine Brown
Date: 4/28/2010 10:41:00 AM
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The best to you should you enter the contest John. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/27/2010 8:27:00 PM
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What an interesting take on the picture. So much captured in this poem. Good luck in the contest. Karen
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Bakari Wright
Date: 4/27/2010 7:05:00 PM
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very deep haiku John, I had to read this one about 5 times
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