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Precocious Steps

More fellers than eyes standing on end as birds watch tread lightly the green

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/18/2010 4:13:00 PM

Cute one, John. I see a very late congratulations is in order for this one!!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 4/30/2010 9:30:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Raul's contest John. Love, Carol

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 4/29/2010 7:57:00 PM

Congrats on the win

Iolanda Scripca

Date: 4/29/2010 7:34:00 PM

CONGRATULATIONS on your 13th place. Let's pop-up the CHAMPAGNE!!!

Date: 4/29/2010 7:28:00 PM

Just wanted to stop by and add congratulations on your win in Raul's contest to my other comment. Enjoy your success. Keep on writing! Karen

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/29/2010 7:14:00 PM

Congrats John on your winning poem in Raul's contest .. great description of the caterpillar and his daily routine.. enjoy your special win..luv.. "Sweetheart"

Rick Parise

Date: 4/29/2010 6:49:00 PM

The little feller paid off!!~Congrats~Rick

Raul Moreno

Date: 4/29/2010 6:26:00 PM

John, congratulations on your success in my Caterpillar's Gait contest...Raul

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 4/29/2010 6:54:00 AM

cute one is this for the caterpillar contest?

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 4/28/2010 10:41:00 AM

The best to you should you enter the contest John. Love, Carol

Rick Parise

Date: 4/27/2010 9:08:00 PM

(sp)Feelers or do you mean fellers

Rick Parise

Date: 4/27/2010 9:07:00 PM

The last line is so very tasty~Love the angle~very nice~Good luck~Rick

Date: 4/27/2010 8:27:00 PM

What an interesting take on the picture. So much captured in this poem. Good luck in the contest. Karen

Bakari Wright

Date: 4/27/2010 7:05:00 PM

very deep haiku John, I had to read this one about 5 times