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Precipitation

drops
falls down
soak the soil
emerging life
rain

seasonslanterne

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Charles Melody Lightning Ink

Date: 11/29/2010 1:30:00 AM

WOW... THIS LANTERNE IS EXCEPTIONALLY DEEP AND THOUGHT PROVOKING. YOU ARE HONORED!!

Sheri Fresonke Harper

Date: 11/28/2010 9:35:00 PM

Pictorial and you say it well:)

Audrey Haick

Date: 11/26/2010 7:30:00 PM

A delightful Laterne, Wilma..Have an exciting weekend, dear friend! Love, audrey

Duncan Chappell

Date: 11/26/2010 6:03:00 PM

nice thoughts here my friend

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/25/2010 9:48:00 PM

Hey, where is the new one for today??

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/25/2010 9:26:00 AM

thankxxx Wilma...may u enjoy the same dear friend... with many more great writes to entertain us all on Soup..luv..

Harry Horsman

Date: 11/24/2010 8:57:00 PM

so much truth in such simplicity, this is awesome Wilma. i do not get much time to spend on soup Wilma. and i miss yours and all the poets contributions. Have a wonderful festive season. Harry

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 11/24/2010 3:42:00 PM

Happy thanksgiving day, SWilma with this fine piece of lanterne

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 11/24/2010 2:56:00 PM

I love this scene, puts me in a place of peace... as all your words do...Love Michael

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/24/2010 2:54:00 PM

It's the cycle of life all in this tiny lanterne!!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/24/2010 12:34:00 PM

Rain to grow for the Earth to shower us with gifts ..lovely Wilma dear.. thankxx Ron is dong OK.. got his results back today .. I will do a blog at some point letting poets know his results a little later luv.. appreciate your sweet concern ..

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 11/24/2010 11:13:00 AM

A beautiful image of rain nourishing the earth, Wilma. Looking at the layout of your poem, it resembles a bush or tree. Excellent lanterne, dear. Love, Carolyn

Fabiyas M V

Date: 11/24/2010 8:58:00 AM

I felt it exceptionally sweet and warm,Wilma.

Stephen Parker

Date: 11/24/2010 8:54:00 AM

Apt description whetted by your free-flowing imagery! Enjoyed your rain siloloquy!

Honesty Oimbo

Date: 11/24/2010 7:51:00 AM

this lanterne is fine

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/24/2010 7:01:00 AM

enjoyed your Poem, Wilma! what an unexpected way to wake up today. Our grounds where soak of water,,lol who knows how long or little it rain last night. Enjoyed the emerging thoughts of the speedy way of life,..p.d.

John Loving Iii

Date: 11/24/2010 6:31:00 AM

guess what it's doing here right now? jhl