Precipitation

drops falls down soak the soil emerging life rain
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Melody Lightning Ink Avatar
November 29, 2010 at 1:30 AM
WOW... THIS LANTERNE IS EXCEPTIONALLY DEEP AND THOUGHT PROVOKING. YOU ARE HONORED!!
Harper Avatar
November 28, 2010 at 9:35 PM
Pictorial and you say it well:)
Haick Avatar
November 26, 2010 at 7:30 PM
A delightful Laterne, Wilma..Have an exciting weekend, dear friend! Love, audrey
Chappell Avatar
November 26, 2010 at 6:03 PM
nice thoughts here my friend
Dietrich Avatar
November 25, 2010 at 9:48 PM
Hey, where is the new one for today??
Sweetheart Avatar
November 25, 2010 at 9:26 AM
thankxxx Wilma...may u enjoy the same dear friend... with many more great writes to entertain us all on Soup..luv..
Horsman Avatar
November 24, 2010 at 8:57 PM
so much truth in such simplicity, this is awesome Wilma. i do not get much time to spend on soup Wilma. and i miss yours and all the poets contributions. Have a wonderful festive season. Harry
Mehta Avatar
November 24, 2010 at 3:42 PM
Happy thanksgiving day, SWilma with this fine piece of lanterne
Falotico Avatar
November 24, 2010 at 2:56 PM
I love this scene, puts me in a place of peace... as all your words do...Love Michael
Dietrich Avatar
November 24, 2010 at 2:54 PM
It's the cycle of life all in this tiny lanterne!!
Sweetheart Avatar
November 24, 2010 at 12:34 PM
Rain to grow for the Earth to shower us with gifts ..lovely Wilma dear.. thankxx Ron is dong OK.. got his results back today .. I will do a blog at some point letting poets know his results a little later luv.. appreciate your sweet concern ..
Devonshire Avatar
November 24, 2010 at 11:13 AM
A beautiful image of rain nourishing the earth, Wilma. Looking at the layout of your poem, it resembles a bush or tree. Excellent lanterne, dear. Love, Carolyn
M V Avatar
November 24, 2010 at 8:58 AM
I felt it exceptionally sweet and warm,Wilma.
Parker Avatar
November 24, 2010 at 8:54 AM
Apt description whetted by your free-flowing imagery! Enjoyed your rain siloloquy!
Oimbo Avatar
November 24, 2010 at 7:51 AM
this lanterne is fine
A   Avatar
November 24, 2010 at 7:01 AM
enjoyed your Poem, Wilma! what an unexpected way to wake up today. Our grounds where soak of water,,lol who knows how long or little it rain last night. Enjoyed the emerging thoughts of the speedy way of life,..p.d.
Loving Iii Avatar
November 24, 2010 at 6:31 AM
guess what it's doing here right now? jhl
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