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Precious Time

With heavenly glow surrounding you, I watch as you sleep; I wonder where you may go when you take your life's leap I watch you breathe...so quiet like the time that has already fallen; I know the days aren't endless, and one day you will find your callin' So right now, I watch you closely because I've been given such a gift; for you are my daughter with that glow, and with my spirit... you always uplift.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 4/29/2012 6:52:00 PM
A wonderful sweet write, enjoyed this very much.
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Date: 3/10/2012 1:32:00 AM
Lovely George truly so.xx Thanks for your lovley comments sorry if I am missing some of your works but life has a nasty habit of getting in the way xx
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Date: 3/7/2012 9:46:00 PM
a vivid portrait painted George with incredible imagery and words luv..
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Date: 3/7/2012 5:42:00 PM
A delightful work that shows so much love and care for one's child..Enjoyed reading this eve..Thanks for the kind review of my work..Sara
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Date: 3/1/2012 7:33:00 PM
enjoyed reading your loving poem....
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