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A true story of Tai and Kai now 'Taikaiwe'.

Our theme is the 'moon spoon'.

Eloping together from South Africa to Wales, we travelled on the London Underground, full of love.

When asked, why we were so happy and whether we were religious, we answered, yes sure and that our faith is 'Taikaiwe' with the crescent the 'Moon Spoon'.

No longer marooned The underworld of pain too much cement concrete delusions with only the scent of stench life force spent a path on descent Curve balls and orbit on steady decline moon waning and waxing to intertwine her shadows with his at first clandestine Once secrets vanished they conquered the moon cherished the crescents squared semi circles’ doom moon spoons dining together to their tune All moments now precious on lunar scape assembled the stars their hearts now agape they took their chance for this epic escape ‘I love you so much’ ‘I adore you so too’ ‘Our orb’s tattoo is thus no longer taboo’ A miracle but the moon always knew 17th March 2017 Syllables checked on howmanysyllables.com

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Teddy Kimathi

Date: 3/29/2017 7:02:00 AM

Congrats Kai, for your well-deserved third placement with this wonderful piece!! ;-)

Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 3/29/2017 8:51:00 AM

Thank you Teddy. Kai

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/25/2017 8:00:00 PM

It's so cool to read that this was so personal for you, Kai. BIG congrats in the contest. I enjoyed seeing your poem

Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 3/26/2017 2:37:00 AM

Thank you Andrea. Life writes the stories and poems...

Janice Canerdy

Date: 3/23/2017 2:18:00 PM

Congrats on your win with this very descriptive write, Michael. Janice

Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 3/26/2017 2:37:00 AM

Thank you Janice. It happened. Many wishes, Kai

Roy Pett

Date: 3/23/2017 4:41:00 AM

Congratulations Kai on your well deserved win, a joy to read and well written, Roy. :))

Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 3/26/2017 2:38:00 AM

Thank you Roy. Life is full of moons and miracles. Many wishes, Kai

Deborah Burch

Date: 3/22/2017 10:34:00 PM

"...A miracle but the moon always knew" ...yes it does :) Congratulations Kai!! Wonderful write!! Well done! big hugs deb

Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 3/23/2017 2:20:00 AM

Thank you Deborah. I have come to learn, that the Universe knows. Tai and I, call it 'God-Incidence'. Many wishes, Kai

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 3/22/2017 10:33:00 PM

I am a huge fan of something different! Such much movement in your celestial world leaves one's head spinning! Congrats, Kai, on your 3rd place win in my contest! :) Kim

Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 3/23/2017 2:18:00 AM

Thank you so much for spinning with me. And thank you for taking the time to sponsor contests. Many wishes, Kai

Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 3/23/2017 2:17:00 AM

Thank you so much for spinning with me. And thank you for taking the time to sponsor contests. Many wishes, Kai

Juli- Michelle

Date: 3/17/2017 9:24:00 AM

I love this write, Kai, well written! Love, Juli-Michelle