Kai Michael Neumann Poet Rhyme

Notes About The Poem

A true story of Tai and Kai now 'Taikaiwe'.

Our theme is the 'moon spoon'.

Eloping together from South Africa to Wales, we travelled on the London Underground, full of love.

When asked, why we were so happy and whether we were religious, we answered, yes sure and that our faith is 'Taikaiwe' with the crescent the 'Moon Spoon'.

 

Precious Moments

No longer marooned 

The underworld of pain too much cement
concrete delusions with only the scent
of stench life force spent a path on descent

Curve balls and orbit on steady decline
moon waning and waxing to intertwine
her shadows with his at first clandestine

Once secrets vanished they conquered the moon
cherished the crescents squared semi circles’ doom
moon spoons dining together to their tune

All moments now precious on lunar scape
assembled the stars their hearts now agape
they took their chance for this epic escape

‘I love you so much’ ‘I adore you so too’
‘Our orb’s tattoo is thus no longer taboo’
A miracle but the moon always knew

17th March 2017

Syllables checked on howmanysyllables.com

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Teddy Kimathi March 29, 2017 at 7:02 AM Congrats Kai, for your well-deserved third placement with this wonderful piece!! ;-) Kai Michael Neumann March 29, 2017 at 8:51 AM Thank you Teddy. Kai

Andrea Dietrich March 25, 2017 at 8:00 PM It's so cool to read that this was so personal for you, Kai. BIG congrats in the contest. I enjoyed seeing your poem Kai Michael Neumann March 26, 2017 at 2:37 AM Thank you Andrea. Life writes the stories and poems...

Janice Canerdy March 23, 2017 at 2:18 PM Congrats on your win with this very descriptive write, Michael. Janice Kai Michael Neumann March 26, 2017 at 2:37 AM Thank you Janice. It happened. Many wishes, Kai

Roy Pett March 23, 2017 at 4:41 AM Congratulations Kai on your well deserved win, a joy to read and well written, Roy. :)) Kai Michael Neumann March 26, 2017 at 2:38 AM Thank you Roy. Life is full of moons and miracles. Many wishes, Kai

Deborah Burch March 22, 2017 at 10:34 PM "...A miracle but the moon always knew" ...yes it does :) Congratulations Kai!! Wonderful write!! Well done! big hugs deb Kai Michael Neumann March 23, 2017 at 2:20 AM Thank you Deborah. I have come to learn, that the Universe knows. Tai and I, call it 'God-Incidence'. Many wishes, Kai

Kim Rodrigues March 22, 2017 at 10:33 PM I am a huge fan of something different! Such much movement in your celestial world leaves one's head spinning! Congrats, Kai, on your 3rd place win in my contest! :) Kim Kai Michael Neumann March 23, 2017 at 2:18 AM Thank you so much for spinning with me. And thank you for taking the time to sponsor contests. Many wishes, Kai Kai Michael Neumann March 23, 2017 at 2:17 AM Thank you so much for spinning with me. And thank you for taking the time to sponsor contests. Many wishes, Kai

Juli- Michelle March 17, 2017 at 9:24 AM I love this write, Kai, well written! Love, Juli-Michelle