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Precious Moments

On the Couch

On the couch, it’s great for me and my Joe.
Our basement’s cool in summer, so we go
downstairs where we can watch a TV show.

And on our couch we often eat meals too
because our eyes we don’t wish to unglue
from our big screen!  Yes, popcorn too will do!

Sometimes lying there is a bit risky.
We might want to get a little frisky!
Yes, that couch is  far better than whisky.


March 9, 2017
Three Rhyming Triplets for the Precious Moments Contest of Kim Rodrigues 
option 3:Two relaxing on a couch
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Neumann Avatar
March 23, 2017 at 2:30 AM
So much better than whisky, indeed. Congratulations, Andrea. Keep watching, Kai
Rodrigues Avatar
March 22, 2017 at 10:38 PM
Per usual, Andrea, you gave me a chuckle! Your poem begins with personal warmth and ends with risky, frisky, better than whisky! Congrats on your placement! Hugs, Kim
Burch Avatar
March 22, 2017 at 10:37 PM
Back with Congratulations Andy!! Well done my friend!! Love you bunches! Deb
Daniel Avatar
March 14, 2017 at 10:00 AM
This sounds so 'unbrisky', ha ha:) great entry, Andrea:)
Marie Avatar
March 13, 2017 at 1:43 AM
How cozy! I love the playfulness of your words for they are indeed "precious moments".:-) A fun read with the BEST ending :-) blessings, lynn
Inman Avatar
March 12, 2017 at 6:36 PM
A fun one Andrea. I wish I had a basement.
Murray Avatar
March 11, 2017 at 3:24 PM
You naughty girl!
Hagy Avatar
March 11, 2017 at 2:43 PM
Ha!...Love it! Very creative Andrea:) I love a rhyme, especially one with a kicker ending!
May Avatar
March 11, 2017 at 4:41 AM
Nicely done Andrea..love the last stanza..best wishes
Burch Avatar
March 10, 2017 at 8:27 PM
Andy!! I love the new last line!! Brava!!! Love you bunches. Deb
Kannan Avatar
March 9, 2017 at 11:57 PM
So sweet and cute...
Roper Avatar
March 9, 2017 at 10:46 PM
nice :) good luck in the contest
Ball Avatar
March 9, 2017 at 9:22 PM
Very cute and different approach to the living room Couch. Nicely done. Good luck in the contest. God Bless and a big 7 from me. JB
Lamoureux Avatar
March 9, 2017 at 9:21 PM
It's great to have someone special to cutle on the couch with. I enjoyed your story Andrea.
Burch Avatar
March 9, 2017 at 8:08 PM
Well done Andy!:) good luck in the contest! This is such wonderful picture. I do so miss those times... love you bunches. deb
Bauer Avatar
March 9, 2017 at 4:44 PM
this is adorable, andrea!
Williams Avatar
March 9, 2017 at 2:35 PM
I really like your poem... I'm smiling!!!
Allison Avatar
March 9, 2017 at 12:12 PM
ooh err Mrs Dietrich lol I like the way your mind took us on this one lol:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
Wolves Avatar
March 9, 2017 at 11:59 AM
Awesomely sweet write... it's wonderful to have someone with which to share such moments... indoors or outdoors. I used to take my wife to St. Augustine to watch the sunrise then slowly make our way over to cedar key and watch it set. Awesome poem
Pigeon Tart Avatar
March 9, 2017 at 10:39 AM
A mile wide grin for you two! x&omo
Hoffman Avatar
March 9, 2017 at 9:19 AM
Snuggle time with hubby, sounds very lovey-dovey! Enjoyed this very cute precious moments write Andrea! G/L in the contest!~Che :)
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