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Precious Moments

On the Couch

On the couch, it’s great for me and my Joe.
Our basement’s cool in summer, so we go
downstairs where we can watch a TV show.

And on our couch we often eat meals too
because our eyes we don’t wish to unglue
from our big screen!  Yes, popcorn too will do!

Sometimes lying there is a bit risky.
We might want to get a little frisky!
Yes, that couch is  far better than whisky.


March 9, 2017
Three Rhyming Triplets for the Precious Moments Contest of Kim Rodrigues 
option 3:Two relaxing on a couch
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017


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Date: 3/23/2017 2:30:00 AM
So much better than whisky, indeed. Congratulations, Andrea. Keep watching, Kai
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Date: 3/22/2017 10:38:00 PM
Per usual, Andrea, you gave me a chuckle! Your poem begins with personal warmth and ends with risky, frisky, better than whisky! Congrats on your placement! Hugs, Kim
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Date: 3/22/2017 10:37:00 PM
Back with Congratulations Andy!! Well done my friend!! Love you bunches! Deb
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Date: 3/14/2017 10:00:00 AM
This sounds so 'unbrisky', ha ha:) great entry, Andrea:)
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Date: 3/13/2017 1:43:00 AM
How cozy! I love the playfulness of your words for they are indeed "precious moments".:-) A fun read with the BEST ending :-) blessings, lynn
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Date: 3/12/2017 6:36:00 PM
A fun one Andrea. I wish I had a basement.
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Date: 3/11/2017 3:24:00 PM
You naughty girl!
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Date: 3/11/2017 2:43:00 PM
Ha!...Love it! Very creative Andrea:) I love a rhyme, especially one with a kicker ending!
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Date: 3/11/2017 4:41:00 AM
Nicely done Andrea..love the last stanza..best wishes
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Date: 3/10/2017 8:27:00 PM
Andy!! I love the new last line!! Brava!!! Love you bunches. Deb
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Date: 3/9/2017 11:57:00 PM
So sweet and cute...
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Date: 3/9/2017 10:46:00 PM
nice :) good luck in the contest
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Date: 3/9/2017 9:22:00 PM
Very cute and different approach to the living room Couch. Nicely done. Good luck in the contest. God Bless and a big 7 from me. JB
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Date: 3/9/2017 9:21:00 PM
It's great to have someone special to cutle on the couch with. I enjoyed your story Andrea.
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Date: 3/9/2017 8:08:00 PM
Well done Andy!:) good luck in the contest! This is such wonderful picture. I do so miss those times... love you bunches. deb
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Date: 3/9/2017 4:44:00 PM
this is adorable, andrea!
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Date: 3/9/2017 2:35:00 PM
I really like your poem... I'm smiling!!!
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Date: 3/9/2017 12:12:00 PM
ooh err Mrs Dietrich lol I like the way your mind took us on this one lol:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 3/9/2017 11:59:00 AM
Awesomely sweet write... it's wonderful to have someone with which to share such moments... indoors or outdoors. I used to take my wife to St. Augustine to watch the sunrise then slowly make our way over to cedar key and watch it set. Awesome poem
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Date: 3/9/2017 10:39:00 AM
A mile wide grin for you two! x&omo
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Date: 3/9/2017 9:19:00 AM
Snuggle time with hubby, sounds very lovey-dovey! Enjoyed this very cute precious moments write Andrea! G/L in the contest!~Che :)
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