Jack Eldridge Poet Rhyme

Precious Moments

As I reflect on our last hide away ,
Set aside from all life's beckoning fray,
And that tough puzzle we conquered that day.

I still can see your beaming childlike face
As the final puzzle piece found its place,
And I loved you then beyond time and space.

That moment in time, now etched in my mind,
Reminds me that you are my greatest find
For our precious love leaves nothing behind.

As complete as that puzzle is our love 
Each piece is a life point we partake of,
Reliving precious moments as above.

03/09/2017

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Teddy Kimathi March 29, 2017 at 7:42 AM Hi Jack. Congrats for your WIN with this brilliant piece!! ;-)

Andrea Dietrich March 25, 2017 at 8:04 PM You are the second one I see did the puzzle theme. GREAT job,Jack and Congrats in this cute contest. Jack Eldridge March 26, 2017 at 6:08 AM Thank you, this was fun. I also wrote on the two sitting on a crescent moon. That was fun as well.

Kai Michael Neumann March 23, 2017 at 2:33 AM Congratulations Jack. Reliving that moment is as precious as the moment. Many wishes, Kai Jack Eldridge March 23, 2017 at 1:15 PM Thank you

Deborah Burch March 22, 2017 at 10:46 PM Congratulations Jack!! Well done my friend!! Lovely write! Hugggs deb Deborah Burch March 24, 2017 at 10:45 PM Bahahahaha!!! :) Jack Eldridge March 23, 2017 at 1:16 PM Thank you! This was a little puzzling..

Kim Rodrigues March 22, 2017 at 10:41 PM ...and that tough puzzle we conquered that day. Very nice, Jack! Congrats on your placement! :) Kim Jack Eldridge March 23, 2017 at 1:17 PM Kim, Thanks for your constant encouragement!