Precious Moments

As I reflect on our last hide away ,
Set aside from all life's beckoning fray,
And that tough puzzle we conquered that day.

I still can see your beaming childlike face
As the final puzzle piece found its place,
And I loved you then beyond time and space.

That moment in time, now etched in my mind,
Reminds me that you are my greatest find
For our precious love leaves nothing behind.

As complete as that puzzle is our love 
Each piece is a life point we partake of,
Reliving precious moments as above.

03/09/2017
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017


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Date: 3/29/2017 7:42:00 AM
Hi Jack. Congrats for your WIN with this brilliant piece!! ;-)
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Date: 3/25/2017 8:04:00 PM
You are the second one I see did the puzzle theme. GREAT job,Jack and Congrats in this cute contest.
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Jack Eldridge
Date: 3/26/2017 6:08:00 AM
Thank you, this was fun. I also wrote on the two sitting on a crescent moon. That was fun as well.
Date: 3/23/2017 2:33:00 AM
Congratulations Jack. Reliving that moment is as precious as the moment. Many wishes, Kai
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Jack Eldridge
Date: 3/23/2017 1:15:00 PM
Thank you
Date: 3/22/2017 10:46:00 PM
Congratulations Jack!! Well done my friend!! Lovely write! Hugggs deb
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Deborah Burch
Date: 3/24/2017 10:45:00 PM
Bahahahaha!!! :)
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Jack Eldridge
Date: 3/23/2017 1:16:00 PM
Thank you! This was a little puzzling..
Date: 3/22/2017 10:41:00 PM
...and that tough puzzle we conquered that day. Very nice, Jack! Congrats on your placement! :) Kim
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Jack Eldridge
Date: 3/23/2017 1:17:00 PM
Kim, Thanks for your constant encouragement!
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