Precious Metals

Quicksilver how fast is she,
   How far can she run.
   Mercury he likes to be,
   Rising with the sun.

   Platinum two lovers sing,
   Party times a blast.
   Liquid gold to wedding ring,
   Church bells ring at last.

   3/ 29/ 2015.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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A  Avatar
May 3, 2015 at 9:52 PM
George, Congratulations on your Trochee poem win. :) SKAT
Allison Avatar
May 2, 2015 at 6:55 AM
Very clever write George congrats on your win:-) Hugs Jan xx
Dietrich Avatar
May 2, 2015 at 12:59 AM
this one was very unique, George. Meter was slightly off in a spot or two, but otherwise, very nicely done. Congrats in my contest.
A  Avatar
May 2, 2015 at 12:49 AM
GEORGE:) Congratulations! Forever ~SKAT~
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