Timothy Mcguire Poet Rhyme

Precious Memories

The cool air drifts through the trees
Carrying along precious memories
Of your laugh and your smile
Happier times, its been a while

There was a time when we wandered these hills
So much in love, I remember it still
Young lovers facing the world
A brave young man and a bright eyed girl

Many seasons have come and gone
It doesn't seem like its been that long
When we were young, strong and running free
I only wanted you and you me

Fate has taken you away
But I feel your whispers here today
As the cool air drifts through the trees
Carrying along precious memories

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Line Gauthier January 17, 2022 at 8:17 PM Beautiful ~ life is not fair. Sadness and heartache sure make great material for lovely poetry though ~ Timothy Mcguire January 17, 2022 at 8:21 PM Thank you Line. My thoughts were with you and other friends when I wrote this.

Tom Cunningham January 13, 2022 at 3:58 AM Those precious memories are like gold Timothy, we revisit them often more so when we're feeling down. Tom Timothy Mcguire January 13, 2022 at 3:56 PM You are right friend. It does not take much to trigger a memory. Like a cool breeze in the trees, thank you

P.S. Awtry January 13, 2022 at 3:21 AM Another beauty! You are on fire! I like the way you used those repeated lines. The opening stanza is its own poem. The last one is too. Enjoyed this wistful write. Timothy Mcguire January 13, 2022 at 3:57 PM Thank you P. S. for your kind words! :)