Liam Mcdaid Poet Couplet

- Precious Gold Drops -

Light falls down from the summer's sheer clouds
For the future no gates remain locked, spread your wings

A bird in the sky your soul flies free intoxicating spirits 
Upon loves beautiful ray of light drunken wavers 

Not dwelling on the past and using energy on what went wrong
Happy people get feelings out done and dusted 

Awakening flames dancing butterflies flutter
Warm inner wings a heart takes glorious flight

Brilliance of a rainbow seducing thoughts softly whisper
Life's worth it's weight in gold, why hesitate ?

Inside the mirrors always aglow
Beauty's in the eyes forever one bows and beholds

A co write written by L. Mcdaid and A -L Andresen

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Debbie Guzzi March 23, 2015 at 8:24 PM So glad to have read your verse this evening keep up the good work! Light & Love

Arthur Vaso March 15, 2015 at 10:25 PM Now this is golden, so beautiful, even I was wishing this was a tale of leprechauns leading me to that famed pot of Irish gold!!!! great collab you two!!!

Andrea Dietrich March 8, 2015 at 4:22 PM Precious indeed.You were born to collaborate on beautiful poetry. Caught you just as I was going off!! Liam Mcdaid March 11, 2015 at 10:29 AM ah so sweet of you andrea anne lise has the golden ink in her quill wonderful comment dear pal heartfelt appreciated

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser March 5, 2015 at 3:39 AM beautiful imagery Liam and Anne Lise.. ! wow! Liam Mcdaid March 11, 2015 at 10:27 AM thank you kindly olive for the very beautiful comment deeply appreciated dear friend Liam Mcdaid March 11, 2015 at 10:24 AM thank you so kindly for the wonderful comment olive deeply appreciated dear friend

Kamran Rashid March 3, 2015 at 4:47 PM I JUST WONDER how can some let their minds and soulz go and think beyond limits#owsm write,,..loved reading and learned alot..#ty iliam fr oll gems.. Liam Mcdaid March 11, 2015 at 7:33 AM just by letting the barriers fall we are all brothers and sisters thank you truly for the wonderful comment heartfelt appreciated kamran deeply appreciated dear friend

Demetrios Trifiatis March 3, 2015 at 10:48 AM You, both, keep mesmerizing me with your writing which makes mine seem so mediocre! A seven to both of you dear Liam and Anne-Lise! Liam Mcdaid March 11, 2015 at 7:16 AM ah thank you demetrios dear pal for the heartfelt very beautiful comment i am sure anne lise will agree bowled me over bless you always dear friend

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty March 1, 2015 at 11:14 PM Warm inner wings a heart takes glorious flight for L and AL Liam Mcdaid March 11, 2015 at 6:45 AM ah rajat thank you kindly dear pal for the sweet very beautiful comment bless you

Dorian Petersen Potter March 1, 2015 at 9:23 PM Hello Liam and Anne-Lise! Another very beautiful amazing love poem penned by you my dearest friends.Just dazzling!A very sweet uplifting, dreamy poem filled of love, dreams, and light.A very huge 7 +++ to each!A very passionate romantic poem filled of warm visions for a better tomorrow to be held very close to ones heart.Smiling.I enjoyed it!love it!Awesome!Your pen is mighty golden!To me you're the best Liam!Very beautiful gentle and sweet!I hope all your dreams and wishes come true Liam and that one day you're very happy.Wishing you all the best!In his light!God bless you always!:)Love and hugs! xoxox D. ^O^ Liam Mcdaid March 11, 2015 at 6:44 AM thank you kindly dorian dear friend for the very beautiful comment bless you deeply appreciated

Jan Allison March 1, 2015 at 4:43 PM Anne Lise and Liam another stunning write from your golden pens - it flows so beautifully with wonderful imagery:-) Hugs jan xxx 7 xxx Liam Mcdaid March 11, 2015 at 6:42 AM ahh thank you deeply jan not on line as much these days wonderful comment heartfelt appreciated bless you

Anne-Lise Andresen March 1, 2015 at 4:40 PM - Another beautiful poem in my collection co write with you Liam - Thank you :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Liam Mcdaid March 11, 2015 at 6:39 AM it sure is anne lise always a pleasure writing with you thank you deeply dear pal wishing you a beautiful day

Casarah Nance March 1, 2015 at 3:58 PM awakening flames dancing butterflies flutter, oh Liam you have such spectacular lines, pleasure to read you :) Liam Mcdaid March 8, 2015 at 3:26 PM casarah thank you so kindly for the heartfelt beautiful comment dear friend wishing you a blessed sunday pal