Len Gasun Poet Diamante

Notes About The Poem

Precious Gifts of Love

God/Jesus
Loving, Good
Saving, Blessing, Guiding
King, Lord of Lords,  Savior, Creator
Teaching, Leading, Fishing
Powerful, Almighty
Father

Father
strong,  industrious
building ,  directing , sacrificing
family head, director,  leader, manager
hardworking, supporting
courageous, patient
Mother

Mother
caring, kind
nursing , assisting, guiding
teacher, adviser, counselor, caregiver, 
leading, molding, supervising
 tender, understanding
friend


Friend
loyal, warm
brothers, sisters
giving unconditional love
  whom we can hold on to and trust, 
 so,love and honor your  father and mother 
one of the commandments
 of God


Above are precious diamonds and gifts of love,
Safely kept in my diamante- poem treasure box.


August 18,2012


First Place
Contest: Diamante
Judged: 11/13/13
Sponsor: Poet Dr. Ram Mehta

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Darlene De Beaulieu May 3, 2024 at 12:13 PM Hello len, yes thews are the precious gifts of love. emnjoy your day my friend. Darlene/

Roger Horsch January 1, 2014 at 9:34 AM I just love this poem Leonora, First because you wrote it, second because it is the truth and third because it was made and is full of love....Hugs....Roger

Poet Destroyer A November 20, 2013 at 7:49 PM WOW... My sweet poetry sis Leo, how did I miss this winning poem from you. I remember the first time I read the Diamente ... I was impressed with your ability in trying out other forms... LOL, I'm such a bore. I stick to the same free falling form... Congratulations... luv always~ LINDA

Sheri Fresonke Harper November 16, 2013 at 2:31 PM wow, Leonora, diamonds in the family galore, excellent transitions, congratulations on your win.

Sara Kendrick November 16, 2013 at 2:24 PM Congrats on your winning work..Way to go..Sara

Juliet Ligon November 15, 2013 at 2:21 PM Creative and powerful connections. Starts with God and ends with God. Congrats, Leonora! Juliet Ligon November 15, 2013 at 2:22 PM P.S. Adding to favs. : )

Anne-Lise Andresen November 15, 2013 at 4:41 AM - Congrats on your fine win, Leonora. - Have a great weekend.- oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud November 15, 2013 at 3:09 AM wow, an array of beautiful diamantes,. dear lorrie.. we are still in the rebuilding period after the typhoon... yes, it os very damamging but people are hopeful.. glad to know your family is safe.. hope to ring you sometime.. sweet cheers to you sweet one.:) huggs

Andrea Dietrich November 14, 2013 at 11:30 PM You went all out. I enjoyed how you progressed from God and to father, mother and friend and back to God again! Congrats to you.

Sandra Adams November 14, 2013 at 7:36 PM oh wow...I love how you did this tier of diamantes....awesome write...congrats on your win :)

Carrie Richards November 14, 2013 at 2:27 PM You have done above and beyond what most of us even attempted. Wow.!! Good for you Leonora.....congrats on your win!!

Bl Devnath November 14, 2013 at 9:35 AM Congrats on your superb win, my friend. Loved always, bl

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl November 14, 2013 at 4:55 AM wow wonderful congrats on your win Leo love xx

Christopher Thor Britt November 13, 2013 at 10:12 PM Leonora. That was so freak'n cool. Not only do I appreciate what/how you did your progressions and tied them together, but who can argue with the message. Blessings, and Grats on your win! CTB

Dr.Ram Mehta November 13, 2013 at 9:59 PM Congrats on the win in my contest and thanks for participating, Leo

Poet Destroyer A November 1, 2012 at 3:27 PM Hi, Leonora, stopping by this one again,,, hope you read my soup-mail soon... one day I'm gonna try one of these diamante. Looks like a good form to try... say hi when you are on sis... talk to you later... and :-( ,,you have no new poems... xox~pd

Poet Destroyer A October 20, 2012 at 9:36 PM One day I will try this form and dedicate to you... i loved this the first time I read it, and now it made me want to run one... xox...see you later sisie-pooh...pd

Andrea Dietrich September 9, 2012 at 6:52 PM hope you are well over the flu now!

Andrea Dietrich August 30, 2012 at 12:51 AM hey, there, I am trying to hurry and get to bed. But I left an explanation on the constanza rules for you at a blog. There were a few others asking me the same thing! Luv,Andrea Len Gasun August 30, 2012 at 6:28 AM Thank you so much, Andrea; however, I can't open/see the blog. Is it ok with you to resend in soupmail? Thanks and God bless you always!!!!

Bukang Liwayway August 20, 2012 at 8:26 AM Excellent poem from an excellent poet...so like it!!!!!!!!!!!CONGRATULATIONS!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Len Gasun August 30, 2012 at 6:26 AM Thank you so much Mary!!!! God bless you always!

Poet Destroyer A August 18, 2012 at 10:49 PM wow I never tried this form... your mother diamante is my favorite and moves me to believe it is true... I'm a mother , my oldest daughter is a mother...motherhood is beautiful... love the friendship i have with my kids... your first one is very inspiring... thanks for the joy of reading your new poem.. ;-),. always ~PD Len Gasun August 19, 2012 at 1:06 AM So grateful and glad to see you again, PD, my greatest and favorite poet! You always lifted again my spirit with joy upon reading your inspirational comments. Thank you so much. I just came up with this after going over the different poetry forms. Thanks again and bless you!

Joann Grisetti August 18, 2012 at 5:34 PM Awesome the way these are all tied together with linking words. Len Gasun August 18, 2012 at 6:57 PM Thank you so much Joann for stopping by here and read this experimented poem of mine. More power and blessing to you always!

Andrea Dietrich August 18, 2012 at 12:09 PM awesome treasures in your treasure box, my friend, I like how this blended from God, to father to mother, friends and back to God!! Len Gasun August 18, 2012 at 6:55 PM Thank you so much, my dearest friend. Great poet like you give me such an inspiration and encouragement to keep writing and experimenting. Million thanks!

Anne-Lise Andresen August 18, 2012 at 4:35 AM I`ve tried one I also - Wordplay poems, in a special shape - I would call it - Funny to make. - I like what you`ve created, well done Leonora. - Have a lovely weekend. - oxox // Anne-Lise :) Len Gasun August 18, 2012 at 6:53 PM Thank you very much my friend! have a wonderful and blessed week-end to you and your family!

Len Gasun August 18, 2012 at 3:28 AM I just tried to write diamante poem. I guess it's easier than ABC.