Precious

Find me a star, a moonbeam to
ride. A cloud of stardust on which
I can lie, find me that rainbow and
grant me that wish. Give me that
dream that fills me of love, grant
me your lips that I may dine. 
Present me thy heart that I may 
sleep in paradise, and I'll kneel
at your soul and offer you love.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Chircop Avatar
February 26, 2010 at 7:06 AM
your words are precious,unique style..Charma
Owens Avatar
February 1, 2010 at 7:53 PM
Wow...steamy love poem...Very nice...Marty
Quintero Avatar
February 1, 2010 at 5:02 AM
Beautiful and flowing piece. Takes you to that place....
Kapoor Avatar
February 1, 2010 at 5:00 AM
Beautiful imagination and expressions of love. Find a star and a moonbeam to ride. Lovely lines and the Poem showing your strong emotions. Thanks. Many thanks for your comments on my Poem My Dream Love. I have placed a new poem today. Hope you would like it. Best wishes and love Ravindra
Sweetheart Avatar
January 31, 2010 at 2:23 PM
Romantic and elegantly written, Daniel... wonderful title too.. to compliment the content.. luv.. Linda-Marie..
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January 31, 2010 at 1:44 PM
very romantic poem, enjoyed reading today.
Haick Avatar
January 31, 2010 at 1:40 PM
A lucky lady she is, I hope she knows this! Great write, Daniel!! Always, well-written. You never disappoint. Peace, Audrey
Clark Avatar
January 31, 2010 at 1:05 PM
Man of my dreams!!! Jeralynn
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January 31, 2010 at 12:53 PM
You write beautifully, Daniel. Your going to my favorite poet list... And Story Time is on my favorite poem list. Thanks for sharing your writing. Smiles, Dane Ann
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