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*Look at the stars, look at how they shine for you and everything you do ... You're a jewel, bereft compare Hewn of star stuff, rich and rare Uniquely shaped to beautify Adorning, bright, a yawning sky Seeded concept - bosom's bloom Sparked to essence in life's womb Perfecting flaws as humans do Yet no one else, the perfect You So tremble not with mortal awe If fed resplendent, virtue's maw Meant to hasten priceless wings Borne through time's meanderings Yearn to pierce the great expanse And twirl to dust, your final dance That latent shore of Heaven's sand This precious life is yours, in hand ... This precious life ... is YOURS. * From the song "Yellow" by Coldplay ~ 2nd Place ~ in the "Famous Poetic Lines 3 - Love Songs" Poetry Contest, Silent One, Judge & Sponsor.

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Date: 2/23/2020 7:56:00 AM
- Congratulations on your winning poem, Gregory :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 2/23/2020 11:27:00 PM
That's very kind, Anne-Lise - thank you, Hon. <3
Date: 2/23/2020 5:51:00 AM
Great take on this lyrics... this is deeply spiritual.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 2/23/2020 11:26:00 PM
Thank you so much, S1 - I'm very pleased you found this worthy of placement. Blessings, Friend.
Date: 2/20/2020 8:37:00 AM
I like the verse beginning with, "Perfecting flaws as humans... You always bring your A game, Greg. Good luck ol' buddy:)
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 2/23/2020 11:25:00 PM
Many kind thanks to you, Danny Boy - so appreciated. :o)

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