Precious

*Look at the stars, look at how they
       shine for you and everything you do ...

You're a jewel, bereft compare
       Hewn of star stuff, rich and rare

Uniquely shaped to beautify
       Adorning, bright, a yawning sky

Seeded concept - bosom's bloom
       Sparked to essence in life's womb

Perfecting flaws as humans do
       Yet no one else, the perfect You

So tremble not with mortal awe
       If fed resplendent, virtue's maw

Meant to hasten priceless wings
       Borne through time's meanderings

Yearn to pierce the great expanse
       And twirl to dust, your final dance

That latent shore of Heaven's sand
       This precious life is yours, in hand ...

This precious life ... is YOURS.





* From the song "Yellow" by Coldplay

~ 2nd Place ~  in the "Famous Poetic Lines 3 - Love Songs" Poetry Contest, Silent One, Judge & Sponsor.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020


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Date: 2/23/2020 7:56:00 AM
- Congratulations on your winning poem, Gregory :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 2/23/2020 11:27:00 PM
That's very kind, Anne-Lise - thank you, Hon. <3
Date: 2/23/2020 5:51:00 AM
Great take on this lyrics... this is deeply spiritual.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 2/23/2020 11:26:00 PM
Thank you so much, S1 - I'm very pleased you found this worthy of placement. Blessings, Friend.
Date: 2/20/2020 8:37:00 AM
I like the verse beginning with, "Perfecting flaws as humans... You always bring your A game, Greg. Good luck ol' buddy:)
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 2/23/2020 11:25:00 PM
Many kind thanks to you, Danny Boy - so appreciated. :o)
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