Precious

When under pressure
we struggle for composure:
our life is precious.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Sietesantos Avatar
May 9, 2018 at 4:45 PM
This is a lovely Senryu addressing the frailty of our human condition. Life is indeed precious and regardless of what challenges we face, we have to put things in proper perspective or stress will take its toll! Best regards. Pandita
Ryder Avatar
May 9, 2018 at 4:58 PM
Thanks Pandita. I am intrigued at how alike the spoken words 'pressure' and 'precious' sound.
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