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Precious

When under pressure we struggle for composure: our life is precious.

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Date: 5/9/2018 4:45:00 PM
This is a lovely Senryu addressing the frailty of our human condition. Life is indeed precious and regardless of what challenges we face, we have to put things in proper perspective or stress will take its toll! Best regards. Pandita
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Lisle Ryder
Date: 5/9/2018 4:58:00 PM
Thanks Pandita. I am intrigued at how alike the spoken words 'pressure' and 'precious' sound.

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