Preceding Dawn

A long kiss goodnight,
Atop the damp grains of sand:
By receded waves.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Chircop Avatar
March 8, 2013 at 4:38 AM
This is lovely Rauli
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March 8, 2013 at 4:59 AM
Thanks.
Poet Avatar
March 7, 2013 at 12:54 PM
Beautiful haiku!
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March 8, 2013 at 4:58 AM
Thanks for stopping by.
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March 7, 2013 at 10:54 AM
amazing, haiku..... nice and lovely when it comes in good health... LINDA
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March 8, 2013 at 4:59 AM
Thanks.
Williams Avatar
March 7, 2013 at 8:02 AM
Raul...exellent...David
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March 8, 2013 at 4:58 AM
Thanks
Rhinehart Avatar
March 6, 2013 at 11:20 PM
Nice imagery, enjoyed it.
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March 6, 2013 at 11:41 PM
Thanks, glad you enjoyed!
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