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Inspired by Kim Rodrigues' profound poem (posted today), 'The God Who Sees,' from which I even stole a line for my title. Kim, you know where to find me...

Prayers Unheard Of

Prayers unheard of
  go unheard
Strange fire offered
  abomination's word

They demon-strate
  and rave and rant ~
Prithee, for Patience
  that they haven't

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Ann Foster

February 6, 2021 at 7:06 AM

Dark... scary... well written. Excellent pen... Ann

Rico Leffanta

February 4, 2021 at 11:08 AM

God has all the time in the World .....Aloha! Rico

Kim Rodrigues

February 4, 2021 at 4:54 AM

As the department stores say “it’s a steal” Glad I could contribute to your muse! “demon-strate” WOW!

Harry Horsman

February 3, 2021 at 9:44 PM

Is this a generation thing? i wonder Gershon, love the poetry, and the meaningful dialog.

Gershon Wolf

February 4, 2021 at 6:12 PM

Interesting question, Harry. My two cents worth: Every generation (almost) is appalled by the injustice and rank corruption of their elders... Then they grow up, and a new wave of youngsters is upset with them... And so it goes. ~ Gershon

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