Prayers Unheard Of

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Inspired by Kim Rodrigues' profound poem (posted today), 'The God Who Sees,' from which I even stole a line for my title. Kim, you know where to find me...

Prayers unheard of go unheard Strange fire offered abomination's word They demon-strate and rave and rant ~ Prithee, for Patience that they haven't

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Ann Foster

Date: 2/6/2021 7:06:00 AM

Dark... scary... well written. Excellent pen... Ann

Rico Leffanta

Date: 2/4/2021 11:08:00 AM

God has all the time in the World .....Aloha! Rico

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 2/4/2021 4:54:00 AM

As the department stores say “it’s a steal” Glad I could contribute to your muse! “demon-strate” WOW!

Harry Horsman

Date: 2/3/2021 9:44:00 PM

Is this a generation thing? i wonder Gershon, love the poetry, and the meaningful dialog.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 2/4/2021 6:12:00 PM

Interesting question, Harry. My two cents worth: Every generation (almost) is appalled by the injustice and rank corruption of their elders... Then they grow up, and a new wave of youngsters is upset with them... And so it goes. ~ Gershon