Kim Rodrigues Poet Monoku

Prayer-monoku series

Prayer

open door to heaven - devil’s descent at such prospects

teeth and claws - the nails on the cross

light seeps through Christ’s wounds - more sheep gather

angels take notice - boldness of blood, sweat and tears

angels and demons - double-edged sword slashes perversity

prayer’s perspicacity - heaven wins

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Laura Leiser February 17, 2025 at 9:51 PM Love your bold, glorious monokus, Kim! Very uplifting to read! Thank you! :)

Hilda Greenhough February 17, 2025 at 1:04 AM Spiritually inviting monoku with an excellent ending. Heaven wins.

Yann Rolland February 16, 2025 at 10:38 PM the fight goes on, evil has not win, interesting set of verses, thanks poet

Regina Elliott February 16, 2025 at 5:15 PM A stirring Christian monoku set, Kim. An enthusiastic FAV! You pen so well. Have a blessed Sunday evening.

Oliver Mckeithan February 16, 2025 at 2:22 PM Good one Kim. Wonderful set of monokus. The last one is the best. Kim Rodrigues February 16, 2025 at 2:49 PM Thank you, Oliver

Paige Hind February 16, 2025 at 8:43 AM Beautiful, the importance of prayer in your poem <3 Kim Rodrigues February 16, 2025 at 10:26 AM Thank you, Paige! Hugs xx

Paula Goldsmith February 16, 2025 at 8:34 AM I enjoyed reading your Monoku writes. Have a fun day as you write away............ Kim Rodrigues February 16, 2025 at 10:27 AM Thank you, Paula! You are a most welcome and faithful friend!