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Prayer For Harvest

Chariots formed from stars on high flown 'cross the sky by emperors in gold raiment's the regal four drew worshipers for rice to rise Son of God ride shine on the land at his command raise the wheat high feed earth for man we pray reply do not deny the food for man.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 12/3/2014 10:43:00 AM
Its been a long while my poetry friend. I hope you are doing well. This is a lovely piece and its a blessing to read it. Nice work..
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Date: 8/14/2014 8:39:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your winning verse Debbie. This one was so easily understood. Have a great day and congrats on your win. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/11/2014 9:58:00 PM
Congrats on your win Debbie...who are the four?...
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Joseph May
Date: 8/12/2014 7:36:00 AM
Thank you Debbie...
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Debbie Guzzi
Date: 8/11/2014 10:12:00 PM
its Chinese mythology Joseph, they named a constellation after an emperor riding a horse drawn chariot - I'd have to look it up again but off the top of my head, they believed the emperor was the voice of God on earth - much as at one time King's felt this way
Date: 8/11/2014 7:18:00 PM
grats on your win!!!
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Date: 8/11/2014 4:49:00 PM
I really like the feel of this! Congrats on your win and thank you for congrats on mine!
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Date: 8/11/2014 5:37:00 AM
Congrats on ur winning awesome write Debbie!
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Date: 8/11/2014 5:10:00 AM
i revel on the mythical feel of this piece, debbie...thanks for supporting my contest and big cheers on your splendid win..huggs
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Date: 8/10/2014 9:28:00 AM
Lovely write Debbie congrats on your win:-) Hugs Jan x
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Date: 8/10/2014 6:17:00 AM
Debbie, a lovely and awesome take on the Chariot theme. Congrats for fine win. Mohan
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Date: 8/10/2014 5:34:00 AM
Very inventive and unique way , dropping again to congratulate you, Deb. Light and Love
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Date: 8/9/2014 4:56:00 AM
hi debbie...SOUP MAIL!
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Date: 8/7/2014 9:27:00 AM
The poem has tints of religious and philosophical expressions. I think nette needs only two stanzas. Please make sure, Debbie. Light and Love
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