Debbie Guzzi Poet Kyrielle

Prayer For Divination

How grand the sky which holds and shelters me
and fine the kiss of sun can be.
So sweet the forest full of scented pine.
Oh Love, Your caring we divine.

Surrounded by abundant fertile sea,
the mountain air so clean and free.
All praise the magnificent forms refined.
Oh Love, Your caring we divine.

We pray Thy beauty affect devotees
to unite all humanity.
And that all hate and fear will soon decline
Oh Love, Your caring we’d divine.

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Andrea Dietrich February 27, 2010 at 9:12 AM Yes, I like better when patterns are used, like in this one, The repeating of that last line, like in a kyrielle or rondeau. It's interesting how sometimes you like my stuff better than usual and sometimes I like something of yours better than usual and I think it has to do with my leaning toward lyrical poetry and you leaning toward free verse! Oh, I just LOVED Salem's Lot!! GOOD and SCARY!

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen February 19, 2010 at 6:37 AM Hi Deb. You are inspiring! These spiritual poems are very peaceful to read. Love you. Dane Ann

David Byrne February 17, 2010 at 7:38 PM This to me is a really nice prayer!

John Freeman February 17, 2010 at 6:25 PM Awesome Deb, I love it. The first Kyrielle form I've viewed. Such a wholesomeness in the last stanza, toward unity of humanity. The Agape is all that will unite in a moral way. Agape, Moses

Linda-Marie Sweetheart February 17, 2010 at 4:05 PM Thankxxx Debbie for your choice of my poem Crystallized for your 4th place winner in Mission Impossible Blank Verse Brain Tease contest.. I am shocked and amazed, humbled and honored... for this win.. I am extremely grateful to u for sponsoring this contest to allow us to reach deep down inside our poetic store and create new and unique words using different form.. congrats to all the winners and to your efforts (and Andrea too) for this superb contest.. luv.. Linda-Marie

Charmaine Chircop February 17, 2010 at 3:45 PM How beautiful are the words of a poet who knows God..awesome..Charma

Carolyn Devonshire February 17, 2010 at 1:31 PM If only we could join hands with people throughout the world and admire the beauty of our planet. You give us some inspiring images, Deborah! Love, carolyn

K K Iloduba Jnr February 17, 2010 at 1:31 PM Suave!