Prayer (2001)

Who will unravel the tangled skein
These silken threads of thoughts?
Each strand possesses a special sheen
But is obscured by knots..

The day seems done before it starts
The night seems swathed in gloom..
For though facts fade, memories last
And clouds then hide the moon.

Who will unravel this tangled skein?
I turn to You dear God
A light to guide, a post to lean
You are the staff for all.

So hold my hands when they do flail
And steer my stumbling steps
And send the wind to swell my sails
And light when the Sun sets.

Steady these shaking fingers, numb
With cold; dispel the fears,
The loneliness when none will come
I know, to dry the tears.

When wanes the moon, recedes the tide
When ebbs the strength I've got
When all goes bleak, be by my side
Dear God, untie the knots.

Unravel then, this tangled skein
Untangle the threads of thoughts
When hopes are lost, teach me to dream
Bring to order the chaos.

When dark clouds hide the midday Sun
And the day in doubts' enmeshed
Rekindle snuffed aspirations
The morrow'll dawn afresh.

Suffuse me with strength so i can scale
The mounts that mark my way
So march on brave, not rant and rave
When it isn't 'my day'.

And tell me God, I needn't hide
For fear- You are with me
And won't forsake your errant child
Who now, ahead, can't see.

That you will show the correct way
Steer me clear of what is wrong
Teach me the words I ought to say
And sing with me my songs.

That you will bring the tunes i need
With music, words to sound
That you will be the flowing ink
when my pen cannot be found.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Longfellow Avatar
July 23, 2010 at 1:45 PM
A wonderful way to give God all the glory for the things He can and will do for us. My favorite part is "That you will be the flowing ink when my pen cannot be found." Loved it ABITHA, Marilyn
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July 20, 2010 at 12:03 PM
Congrats on the well deserved feature of your poem. You are a talented poet. keep writing. I admire your work. -Mohammad
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July 19, 2010 at 11:34 AM
Congrats on having your poem being featured this week, enjoy the honor and keep writing. Love, always Adeleke
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July 19, 2010 at 5:56 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Abitha. Love, Carol
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July 18, 2010 at 6:35 AM
Many congrats on your feature this week. Rgds Jan
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June 5, 2010 at 8:08 PM
What an inspirational poem. Congratulations on making it through the first round of the Poetry Soup contest with this poem. Best wishes in the finals. Karen
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June 4, 2010 at 2:11 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round Abitha. I wish you the best in the finals. Love, Carol
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May 28, 2010 at 6:29 PM
Abitha -Congratulations on having your poetry featured this week, God Bless, mj
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May 25, 2010 at 8:53 AM
You have graciously pen an execelent verse. I truly enjoyed the read. Congratulations on being featured the week. Caryl
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May 25, 2010 at 5:15 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Abitha. May you have many more features and may you find loads of inspiration along the way. Love, Carol
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May 24, 2010 at 1:02 PM
Many congrats on your wonderful featured piece this week. Rgds Janette
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May 23, 2010 at 4:35 PM
What an inspirational piece. Nice use of imagery and alliteration. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Well deserved honor. Keep that pen flowing. Karen
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June 9, 2009 at 10:16 AM
Beautiful...This Is Magnificent. <3 Peace. Boo
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June 5, 2009 at 7:49 AM
Thrilling indeed. It ryhmes beautifully.
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