Notes About The Poem
This an OPEN VERSE uses spaces&breaks without grammatical symbols relies upon 'the one breath limitation' this intuitive cadence pemits the 'reader' (reciter) to respond in an interpretative - interplay unique to the ' happening

POWERS OF COMPREHENSION

POWERS OF COMPREHENSION
expectations
 powers
responsive
&
laden
   pictures 
of 
sublime
    imagery
causing
 conscious 
&
imitative 
    aesthetic 
concerns
     to
soon 
    blossom
powerful
 coloured 
 visions
aiding
understanding
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August 20, 2026 at 8:11 PM
Thought you would enjoy a more in-depth comment:- This is a fascinating exploration of spatial form and breath. The cascading structure visually mimics the "blossoming" of thought you describe in the text. By removing grammatical symbols and relying on your "one breath limitation," you successfully invite the reader into an active, meditative rhythm that feels entirely organic. The poem beautifully captures how sublime imagery and aesthetic resonance weave together to forge true comprehension. A wonderfully intuitive and visually engaging piece!
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