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Paper people putter about Onlookers to inhuman screens Watchers of those queens and teens Enthused, amused at others tout Reaching into an empty drought Lesson: This is a combination of Acrostic and Spanish Quintain or Quintilla rhyme scheme a,b,b,a,a It is suppose to have four feet not sure if I gave it its proper shoes though.. Ha!! Ha!!..It does have eight syllables per line..Not sure if it does its du, dum or not.. Sponsor: Poet Destroyer A Contest: Acrostic # 1

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Kika Ayala

Date: 8/20/2014 12:45:00 AM

Beautiful write! Congratulations on a well-deserved win! Regards, Kika

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/19/2014 4:45:00 PM

luv that alliteration in the beginning. GREAT win. Congrats, Sara.

John Lawless

Date: 8/19/2014 8:41:00 AM

OH, Sara, you are just one mixed up kid. Love the shoe pun and the last line of the poem speaks loudly.

Jan Allison

Date: 8/19/2014 6:52:00 AM

I struggle with the acrostic form let alone trying to add others - WOW a great win - well deserved:-) Hugs jan xxx

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/19/2014 5:20:00 AM

Amazing and clever write, Sara. congrats on the win

Casarah Nance

Date: 8/18/2014 6:42:00 PM

Oh you are such a talent, to combine forms and it still be beautiful well done Sara! Hugs, Grats on your win :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/18/2014 6:12:00 PM

Sara, Congratulations!!! Enjoy your winning poem, I had tons of fun, going over the winning poems. If you like, stop by my latest blog "Things That Suck" Featuring Andrea's awesome title and poem, if you like. Always ~LINDA~

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 6/11/2014 4:29:00 PM

:) This one is cute little poem.. :) i like it.. :D