Poverty

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Always grew up in poverty
Moms rented the space and property

At times we struggled and seeing her in pain always bothered me
Honestly

I thought about doing robberies
Because I wanted to bring in more broccoli constantly

Even if I never possibly
Had a chance to ever win the lottery

But I knew that would probably
Break her heart apart, which was wrong of me

So I tried to do it responsibly
And properly
But I haven't really hit the mark, due to too much monotony

Does it make me crazy?
I don't know maybe

It's all good in the hood

If you don't ever want to accept my apology
I'll just continue on my odyssey
Treating others with respect and equality
As I move vertically and horizontally

I've worked with a fair share

Of commodities
But never mahogany

To tell you the truth, I've always had an interest in archaeology
And so many other things including astrology

In space there remains anomalies
Amid a galaxy full of objects moving at high speed velocities

Scientists using newer and better technology
With excitement and curiosity
Looking to find some kind of new life form or colony

By: Dalton Ogletree

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 1/24/2017 6:58:00 PM
Awesome Dalton your rhymes are intriguing and natural. Really well done.
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Date: 2/1/2017 10:12:00 AM
Thank you Phil, I appreciate that!
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