Pouring Rain

by Michael J Falotico

                                              We held hands in the pouring rain..
                                         When all was crazy we just kept it sane..
                                               We kissed between the raindrops..
                                      And prayed these moments would never stop..
                                          When the world is having fun in the sun..
                                    We sit and pray the clouds will bring back that day..
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Neels Avatar
May 22, 2011 at 1:01 PM
Who wouldn't chose the clouds if you can spend it with a love one :) lovely, romantic write MJF.. Quick soupmail btw.. love Wilma
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May 21, 2011 at 10:20 AM
You amaze me thru and thru.... Michael... Look at me i said one more poem 'thats all' ...lol... and yet i opened another one... i love it... and the rain is my best sensation when all is gone or here.... great one,..p.d.
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May 21, 2011 at 8:26 AM
thankxx Michael for the special wishes from u and Roseanna.. they are a treasure to me and am being ultra spoiled today from Ron and my sons... even my pets gave me presents..oh ... so cute.. and the day has just begun luv.. u two have a fantastic weekend cause your Jersey Girl is in celebrating mode.. hope it never ends luv..
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May 21, 2011 at 2:20 AM
* “This Is Very Sweeet & Soft * Dear Gifted & Wonderful Michael. * I Love This Precious Quality About Your Beautiful Gentle Heart * And Tis Always The Same * Rarely Does Your Tender Spirit * Veer From This Course of Such Beauty. * Sincerely With Love * Sarah” *
Dietrich Avatar
May 21, 2011 at 1:28 AM
ahhh, choosing rain over sun. IN this one it works. So romantic, Michael.
Sweetheart Avatar
May 20, 2011 at 9:55 PM
Melodious lines of great depth Michael and a very expressive romantic picture painted with your lilting words my W.K. your Jersey Girl enjoying the rain still luv..
Mehta Avatar
May 20, 2011 at 5:43 PM
Very very romantic thoughts in the pouring rain, Michael
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May 20, 2011 at 4:21 PM
Rainy days can be very soothing and romantic as well, Michael. Your poem brings back some great memories of rainy days. Guess there are memorable moments we'd all like to bring back. Beautifully expressed! Love, Carolyn
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